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Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from jamielnorris
Review:
love the series please update when you get inspired
Review By [jamielnorris] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just started to reread this series Again and I hope you get inspired update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Chicken Sandwich::

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You must not fight too often with one enemy,
or you will teach him all your tricks of war.
- Napoleon Bonaparte
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from Vilkath
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Story was pretty good all way up to the whole Kendra bit. Then it went well beyond ballance and free will, powers that be blatantly took over her mind and created a monster.. and no one did a darn thing about it. Not mention Xander suddenly fought like utter crap in that fight to conviently lose the fight.. another vamp just happens to be there watching and none of Xanders enhanced senses noticed either of them?

Over all the story believablity factor fell out the bottom of this fic in the last chapter.
Comments from author:
I can accept that. Probably part of why I failed to continue it, I just couldn't get myself to believe what would come next.

Thanks for the review though. :)
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from Bobboky
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still one of the greats
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from IcemanII
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Great story. New way to show just how dumb the PTB are.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from jamielnorris
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loved the story is the story over i have read knight errant an so on marvelous story please keep writing
Review By [jamielnorris] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from Dragonelf
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::Feeds the plot bunny::

::Starts reading the next story in the series::


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Spock: To hunt a species to extinction is not logical.
Gillian: Whoever said the human race was logical?
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from Dragonelf
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I have just started to reread this series.

::Continues reading the story::

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Insanity is often the logic of an accurate mind over-tasked.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from daveykins
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Please finish this part - this is a great series.
Review By [daveykins] • Date [3 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from Kirallie
Review:
So do you thin you'll ever find a way to finish this part?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from AnthonyR
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you cant leave it like that! finish the story please.
Review By [AnthonyR] • Date [31 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Brilliant series. Looking forward to the inbetween stories, whenever they happen. I LOVE the long chapters!

I actually have read this one twice. It was just as good the second time around.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from purrfus
Review:
Poor Xander - darned if you do or don't. Sorry your muse left you. I have set this story up with tracking just in case you do come back.
Comments from author:
Muse didn't leave so much as demanded I move on to the next story (Knight Errant) and I haven't had time/motivation to go back and finish "Super Xander Season 1", since I'm now onto Season 3. As for the as-yet unfinished story in Knight Gallery (Season 3 of FWK) that's more a lack of time than a lack of plot - I know exactly how Family Problems should run through to it's finish, as well as the story, which I had hoped to have out for Halloween at one point, which follows it.

After that things get a little murky on the story level, but I still have a concept for the full arc.

Dana...
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from ROGMethos
Review:
I really liked this Halloween one better than some, although poor Xander he never gets a break. I liked the way you gave him a whole new HL personality than the ones form the show. I've never seen Forever Knight but with the little bit you had with Le Croix makes we want to go out and buy the Seasons!
Comments from author:
There's a whole lot more LaCroix in the next stories. (Knight Errant and Knight Gallery)
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from SmacksKiller
Review:
Are you still going to continue this story?
Comments from author:
Sort of.

Knight Errant is a continuation of the story, set about a year later (or twenty odd years, by Xander's time.)

I MAY write some stories set between the two, but if so they will be encapsulated, self sufficent little tales.

I will more likely continue from a later point after KE.

Does that make any sense?

Dana...
Review By [SmacksKiller] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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