Review of chapter "fun, family and furniture" from agnar
I liked this fic until you tossed in the Belmont and Hellsing crosses. It felt like too much extra, and it means mostly leaving the buffyverse behind. Not to mention how much I dislike and don't really buy your Alex suddenly being all subservient and bending over for Whistler and the PTB's.
Yes sir, I'll work for your PTB's, yes sir, I'll leave the hellmouth, yes sir, I'll take it up the ass like a good boy!
It annoyed me and felt incredibly out of place, he's mentally 5000 years old and he's just bending over and taking it, letting these PTB assholes tell him what to do.
He's far too passive towards them running his life.
Review By [agnar
] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from BankruptSamurai
It's not often that I read "Highlander" fics. As a rule, I think that they're a bit overdone. However, your "Repossessed" story was incredibly fun, CrazyDan. While the change from Xander to Alex was unexpected, it was not unwelcome and when he was still dealing with the BtVS crew, made me laugh more than once. It's nice to occasionally see a story where Xander isn't a pawn to be played with by Buffy and Willow. The fact that he bites back just made it all the sweeter.
Don't get me wrong, love both of the characters - but before I even read fanfiction and instead watched the series as it aired I found their attitudes (especially regarding Xander) towards Xander in season's three and four denigrating and more than a little annoying. And that was when I was like nine. Granted, nine year old mind says Buffy and Willow are mean, but whatever. Point stands. Loveable, if not a bit brain-damaged. :D
So to read fanfiction where Xander doesn't put up with canon for-your-own-good bullying is cool.
But what I especially liked is how the story veered away from typical "Highlander" mainstays and into . . . I think it should be described as "awesomeness." Alex is essentially the One via Powers That Be that are NOT hateful dicks, he's a Belmont because it fits so nicely in the Buffyverse, makes friends with Hercules, the head of house for all Hogwarts, sorta legally saves Harry from his own damn series and then raises Harry into a superhuman analogue of a Super Saiyan. While doing the same for himself. And taking over the world. With science. My mind may have melted at that point, but it was so very enjoyable.
Oh yeah. Did almost all this with Seras Victoria at his side. BtVS/Hellsing is probably my favorite crossover along with BtVS/X-Men and BtVS/Devil May Cry and I've always enjoyed stories where Xander and Seras hook up. So, this story deserves props. Many, many props of various and shiny natures. It's a shame it was never finished, but what you wrote brightened what was a pretty dull February evening. High-five. Or bro-fist.
Whatever suits your fancy, sir.
Review By [BankruptSamurai
] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from HMaxMarius
****It's been too long since an update, but I've go a lot of this to type out and I've still got Child of Rao on the burner as well as the next Fury ficlet.
Harry will have some more prominent parts in the upcoming chapters including both Ranma and Tenchi crossovers.
Should have a Rao chapter and a Fury ficlet up tomorrow. After that it's back to work. I've got a week's vacation in October so that should allow me some time to get this typed up nice and proper.****
Thus sayeth the sooth seven years ago... =P I'm assuming the dog ate your computer ;)
Review By [HMaxMarius
] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "vaults, visions and Valen?" from semaxxx
4 vaults is an unneeded cliche.
Review By [semaxxx
] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from tchizek
Very interesting story. A bit heavy on the super Xander but all fun. Sad it is inactive for so long.
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from ebony
I just finished rereading this and even though it hasn't been updated in years I am still holding out for it to be completed some day.
Review By [ebony
] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Keldin
I don't recall what sent me to reread this, but it was fun reading it again. I know it hasn't been updated in years. Any chance of that changing? :)
Review By [Keldin
] • Date [9 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from KrisB
I've read this story three times and it is great each time. My only problem is that you've not added a few chapters. If anything, you've introduced that the Sailor Scouts exist in that time line and have aimed an immortal god level powered Harry at them to seduce as his harem.
If I recall correctly, the thing that causes them to rule is something like a metor wiping out most of humanity. Do you really think that Xander and Harry won't have a very impressive planetary shield or even worse something like a planetary level space drive to just move the planet out of way?
With the way that you are going, it will easily be within their abilities. Actually, I guess you could just have instead of most of humanity being killed off for Xander to move them into his demon condos and after the ice age is over to terraform Earth back to the way it should be. Poor Sailor Pluto will be out of luck though.
I can't wait until Xander basically arranges to buy all the land of the various hell mouths and just move the people away and build a large wall around it. It's about the best that he can do within his rules.
I can't wait for his various girls to get mad for him for basically getting married without them. ;)
Review By [KrisB
] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Scorpio
Would love to see more of this insanity. It's fun, it's franticly paced, and it's really really different.
Also, would love to find out how certain things turned out. Such as...
-Watcher's Council: the death of Travers. What effect does that have?
-Harry & Dumbles: How did Albus react to Harry's removal from #4 Privet Dr & the Dursley's arrest?
-Hellsing: They helped Alex & Harry alot, will they be getting Gyver weapons or other tech to add them in the fight?
-Scoobies: Do they hear about the happenings off the Hellmouth & if so, do they connect it to Alex?
Review By [Scorpio
] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Zaxxon
This just grows and grows...
... still fun though.
Any more coming?
Review By [Zaxxon
] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Netchka
Very good story. Are there more chapters coming? Please? Soonish? I really, really hope so. Until then Keep Writing. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Review By [Netchka
] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Doodle
Excellent chapter/fic. 10,000/10
It's a shame this and Child of Rao 2 haven't been updated in awhile.
Review By [Doodle
] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from xMedox
Nice story. Even though in the end superpowers were getting kinda out of hand... Any chance of further update?
Review By [xMedox
] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Mordare
Another one of yours I found thoroughly enjoyable.
Review By [Mordare
] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Urkel, Burkle, Boo on Bill" from Angelskuuipo
This has been an entertaining (if at times a little confusing as I'm not familiar with some of the crosses) read. :) I hope life and your muse lets you return to it someday soon.
Review By [Angelskuuipo
] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Not Rated