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Review of chapter "Making talk" from MinakoRei
Review:
LMAO please continue ^^
Review By [MinakoRei] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from KatieKat
Review:
Hey i love this story please update again soon

Katiekitty
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
Review:
Verrry interesting. Dawn's food, her reaction to Logan and mutancy were also hilarious. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [17 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making talk" from AgentJG
Review:
great story so far. i really hope you update soon
Review By [AgentJG] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making talk" from SomethingWicked
Review:
HEY.... make with the updates, I NEED more!!!
And thats as nicely as I can ask....
Review By [SomethingWicked] • Date [23 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making talk" from YingFaWolf
Review:
cool! update!
Review By [YingFaWolf] • Date [5 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Nice story, and one I'd like to see continued.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [19 Sep 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from SamDragon
Review:
Very good.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [1 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from Kneazles
Review:
Very intresting, I really enjoyed this chapter
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [31 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making talk" from banner
Review:
And a Teenage Dawn confusing everyone in the area...
Comments from author:
lol. That's the way I love to write Dawn. It feels so her.
Review By [banner] • Date [31 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making talk" from vampiredemons
Review:
I do really like the story. Way cool. If the German guy is the blue one from the movie, it's Kurt, Kurt Wagner. Other than that the story is really awesome, I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Just changed the kirk to Kurt, thanks for pointing that out, or else I might have gone chapters of spelling his name wrong, and people might be thinking it was the guy from StarTrek, as pointed out to me, also. Glad you liked,
-Ash
Review By [vampiredemons] • Date [30 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making talk" from Fooo
Review:
Dawn seems a little bit out of character (perhaps even Mary Sue-ish), but this is otherwise quite good.

Thanks.
Comments from author:
huh, really? If you mean because she's not all sad, or klepto, I wrote this fic where all her past wounds healed, and not exactly everything happened in season seven. But if not, and you mean maybe overly perky, I usualy tend to write Dawn that way, but I'll try toning it down a bit. Thanks for reviewing,
-Ash
Review By [Fooo] • Date [30 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "quick trip and into confusion" from spk
Review:
This is the 1st fic I've read that wasn't a BtVS/LotR x-over. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'd never even thought about crossing with X-men. I love the way you wrote Dawn's character. You definitely have her attitude down. Can't wait to read more. :)
Comments from author:
Yay! So glad you enjoyed. It means alot you reviewed,
-Ash
Review By [spk] • Date [29 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "quick trip and into confusion" from MusingsOfApathy
Review:
Good story. It was well written and well thought out. This could be a seed to a longer story, as she has not even gotten home yet.

Thanks for writing.

Mike.
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [28 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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