I do really like the story. Way cool. If the German guy is the blue one from the movie, it's Kurt, Kurt Wagner. Other than that the story is really awesome, I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Just changed the kirk to Kurt, thanks for pointing that out, or else I might have gone chapters of spelling his name wrong, and people might be thinking it was the guy from StarTrek, as pointed out to me, also. Glad you liked, -Ash
Review By [vampiredemons] • Date [30 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Dawn seems a little bit out of character (perhaps even Mary Sue-ish), but this is otherwise quite good.
Thanks.
Comments from author:
huh, really? If you mean because she's not all sad, or klepto, I wrote this fic where all her past wounds healed, and not exactly everything happened in season seven. But if not, and you mean maybe overly perky, I usualy tend to write Dawn that way, but I'll try toning it down a bit. Thanks for reviewing, -Ash
Review By [Fooo] • Date [30 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "quick trip and into confusion" from spk
Review:
This is the 1st fic I've read that wasn't a BtVS/LotR x-over. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'd never even thought about crossing with X-men. I love the way you wrote Dawn's character. You definitely have her attitude down. Can't wait to read more. :)
Comments from author:
Yay! So glad you enjoyed. It means alot you reviewed, -Ash
Review By [spk] • Date [29 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "quick trip and into confusion" from MusingsOfApathy
Review:
Good story. It was well written and well thought out. This could be a seed to a longer story, as she has not even gotten home yet.
Thanks for writing.
Mike.
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [28 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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