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Review of chapter "A Surivivor Found & The Truth Revealed" from BrownFinderth
Review:
A very poignant, heartrending story that I with the author had been able to continue with!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remember When It Rained" from FireWolfe
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I found this here and at fanfiction.net. I would so love to see more then just four chapters. It is a really interesting idea and it is not all fluffy puppies to begin with. I like the twist.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Surivivor Found & The Truth Revealed" from spring
Review:
I love what you have so far. This so far is wonderful so one question, did you decide to not finish this wonderful fic or has real life gotten in the way? Please update this wonderful story soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Surivivor Found & The Truth Revealed" from spk
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Please, oh please, pick this story back up. I'm interested to see the reunion between Buffy and Spike and how Elliot handles learning the truth. Also, where's Kennedy...does anyone remember her? Good job so far.
Review By [spk] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember When It Rained" from Goopy
Review:
Very interesting idea. I like this well enough, a couple of little niggly things jumped out at me. Your POV changed right at the beginning eg "Buffy Summers glanced at the Slayers..." and then a few sentences later it was "As for me, I’m stuck in a condo by myself. But then again I like it. " I felt that sentence/POV change threw me off the flow of the story. As another reviewer has said, the story seems to be moving a little quickly and some of the events like Elliot just so happening to run into Buffy at such an emotional time in his life just seemed a little too unbelievable. I understand that you may be wanting to get to other parts of the story but as a reader, I really appreciate it when an author fleshes it out so to speak.

Best of luck with the rest of story.
Review By [Goopy] • Date [23 Dec 06] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Surivivor Found & The Truth Revealed" from canadiangodess
Review:
I love it!! Hope you update soon!!!
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [25 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Surivivor Found & The Truth Revealed" from aussiemel
Review:
Love it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember When It Rained" from freespoons
Review:
you're right, that was a bit of a flame, i'm sorry (i was in a bad mood, but no excuse still)

so rather then flame, im going to give you some constructive critisism (but not good spelling) i'll admit that i only got as far as when you had buffy found out who her father was, but thats only about 4 or 5 paragraphs into the story. because you rushed it so much, it made buffy seem very OOC. i figure youre just trying to get to the meat of the story, but it starts the story out on a bad note.

you also might want the search for elliot (not a uncommon name) to take more then 2 minutes. i have no problem rushing boring procedures, but only one elliot stabler? thats a little too much.

the reason i finally quit reading your story was when you got a really basic fact of SVU wrong. Elliot was not in the Army. He was never in the Army. In fact, I bet while he was in THE MARINE CORPS, he insulted the Army. (sorry, my entire family is marine corps...the dif. between the two was drilled into my head at an early age)

again, sorry about the last review
Comments from author:
Apology accepted. I owe you an apology too. When I read your review, I was furious that after all the hard work on getting this story on this site, my first review had to be a flame. I usually ignore them but for some reason, I needed to vent my frustration and my anger out by giving my opinion of what I thought and to point out some things to you. But I was overly rude doing so. Anyway, about some of the mistakes I made in the story, I knew that Elliot was in the Marine Corps but I didn't realize my mistake until when you pointed out to me in your review/flame (I will be more careful in the future when it comes to details). So if you have any ideas how I could improve this story (or better yet how I could revise it since I'm seriously thinking of doing that) then tell me either through another review or e-mail me at carterangel84@hotmail.com and I'll take your ideas into consideration

Again, I accept your apology. Also, again, I apologize for the way I reponded to your review/flame.
Review By [freespoons] • Date [30 Jul 05] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember When It Rained" from freespoons
Review:
i'm sorry, i got a few paragraphs into this fic and had to stop. buffy is so OOC, just happens to have forgotten the box her mother gave to her 5 years ago and opens it. then, doing a world-wide search, they find only one "Elliot Stabler" and he just so happens to be down the street from them? plus, stabler was never in the army. he was a marine. big difference.

i love buffy's father is someone not Hank Summers fics, but this one is just bad.
Comments from author:
THEN WHY BOTHER READING IT????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I asked for a review not a flame!!!!! I consider this review to be a flame so do yourself a favor and take your flames to someone else who deserves them. I've read stories that are a lot worse and plus there are a lot of people out there who love stories like this. This story is also on FanFiction.Net and I got 17 reviews all of them great and no flames. I worked hard on this story and I don't appreicate being flamed for a perfectly good story. I don't like flames and I don't have the patience for them. So like I said, take your flames somewhere else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [freespoons] • Date [29 Jul 05] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember When It Rained" from EricThorsen
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Um... yeah. A little contrived there don't you think? Slayer finds out that she has a biological father. Slayer finds murdered slayer and woman, along with womans kids. Slayer meets husband/father of said woman and kids. Slayer finds out that father is her biological father. I would suggest rethinking this chapter, mainly because it just screams plot device, and also because the idea deserves so much better. Don't get me wrong, this is great idea, and I think you could do a whole lot better with it. You might want to let the wife and kids live a bit longer, maybe even semi-permanently, and work with how Buffy fits in with her father's family. I think you might find that the story is easier to write that way, and you can still traumatize everyone by the wife and kiddies finding the decapitated slayer outside their apartment. Just a thought.
Comments from author:
I've considered it but writing it and posting it on FanFiction.Net, I had to rewrite the first chapter because I got a lot of negative reviews and most of the readers liked this version better. So, yeah. I tried doing it that way and it just didn't work for me. But thanks for the suggestion anyway.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [29 Jul 05] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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