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The Miseducation Of Lucius Malfoy (Revised)

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Review of chapter "Author's Note/Update" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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Congratulations on being clean and sober and most especially on being happy.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note/Update" from BalanceofGrey
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I'm glad you're doing better. I've had some dark times of my own, and I know how nearly impossible it is to be creative when you're living in a fog of pain. I hope that you'll continue with this story, because in it I see the beginnings of what could be a truly epic story.

Take care.
Review By [BalanceofGrey] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note/Update" from EasterCat
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I'm disappointed that you inserted a song into the story. It wasn't organic to the story and it was performed by Celine F'in Dion, which makes it even more offensive.
If you're going to insert songs randomly, you should warn people so we can avoid this kind of nonsense.
Comments from author:
Um, you do realize that this was written several years ago when I was still developing my writing style, right? But anyway, thanks for the comment and for giving me another reason to give this story a massive rewrite (yes, I admit that there were a lot of flaws in the fic that need to be fixed).
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note/Update" from ChikaraKatherine
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I'm glade your doing far better at this point in your life. Update as you can. Just stay happy. Thats all I demand of you.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of story "The Miseducation Of Lucius Malfoy (Revised)" from dubbi
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I hope you'll take this story up again, I enjoyed the first chapter anyways :)
Review By [dubbi] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Miseducation Of Lucius Malfoy (Revised)" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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This is an interesting beginning. I would like to encourage you to take this up again.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [16 Jun 08] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Miseducation Of Lucius Malfoy (Revised)" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will find inspiration to continue this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 May 07] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Miseducation Of Lucius Malfoy (Revised)" from Lin
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So, was someone posing as Lucius with poly-juice for 15 years or did he just disappear...how did he stay alive in the church?
Some of the wording could have been better...like your description that the scars looked like they were 15 years old and then...come to find out they were. Just kinda seemed redundant.
How old is Buffy and how old is Draco? I like that you had Lucius refuse Voldemort, i don't think i have found a story where he did..i have read many where he returned to the side of the light, but none where he was never on Voldy's side to begin with.
Review By [Lin] • Date [4 Jul 06] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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