Review of chapter "Afternoon Tea" from FicChick
I like this story so far. Please continue it. The bits of brattiness in Andrew's personality helped keep him IC; most people only remember his attempts as seeming all-knowing, and while those are funny, they didn't happen nearly as often as his immature whining did in BtVS. Also, his guest roles in the final season of AtS showed he was starting to mature enough to be trusted with more important missions like the investigation he was sent on in your story, so that's believable too. Oz, however, seemed too talkative to me.
Review By [FicChick
] • Date [17 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Afternoon Tea" from banner
*Really* interesting setup.
This looks complex and intriguing.
Review By [banner
] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breakfast" from adoxerella
I've read everything you have so far, and I'm really enjoying it. You've done well with all the characters. I'm looking forward to seeing where you continue to take them.
Also, I wanted to say how much I loved your words in this chapter especially. You made me ache for Remus at the start of this chapter when he wakes. "Too many nights of his life were spent in grief." Owwie! It's a good ouch mind you, but damn did that sentence kill me. A wonderful choice of words.
Review By [adoxerella
] • Date [13 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Supper" from VillageOrchid
A different pair of characters and a different feel. However very PTB at work for similarly personalitied and problemed characters to meet each other and have their experiences inform the other. I'm still curious about what's next, but stilll find Oz and Remus the more sympathic characters to follow. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [14 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breakfast" from VillageOrchid
I'm really enjoying the overall feel, pacing and characterization of your story so far. It has me looking forward to both plot development and character moments. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [14 Aug 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breakfast" from anabellatrix
Love it Love it Love it!!! Any fic with both Oz and Remus in has got to worth a look and this is well written, holds your interest and leaves you wanting to see what happens next (Hint Hint!!) This has so many possibilities and is an original take on a much written crossover category. Keep it up!! Thanks.
Review By [anabellatrix
] • Date [30 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]