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Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from Hanzo
Review:
♥brilliant♥.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from apollo
Review:
Are you ever continuing this? It is one of your best stories, and I really like it. I've been tracking you on ff.n for a while, but only just found your tth account.

BTW, another one of my favorites is "Overtime, Major Overtime". Way too few DLM crossovers. Any chance of more, either with the Coruscant Reapers, or another DLM cross (say Buffy, Stargate, new BSG, or Andromeda)? While I'm thinking about it, is "The Death of Two Faithful Padawans" in the same 'verse as "Overtime, Major Overtime"?
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you enjoyed it so much:)
If I do continue this it won't be any time soon, I'm already too busy updating Erpman and Sphinxes and Astrea portas on ff.net. Hopefully I'll also be able to update unrealised realities sometime soon too:(

Overtime was just a one shot thing and I haven't actually thought of adding those two fics together. Maybe of the mood ever strikes me and I decide to add write about Scout's life as a Reaper I may join them.

Anyway thanks for the feedback:) I always like to hear from my readers:)
Review By [apollo] • Date [23 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from Bobboky
Review:
pretty cool stuff
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from anpu
Review:
The card catalog scene is extremely hilarious and the entire story is top quality. Please, I challenge you to make this story at least 100 lengthy chapters. Thank you.
Review By [anpu] • Date [16 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from Dragonelf
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I hope you gets inspired to continue this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from purrfus
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There were some formatting issues in chapters 1 and 3 and a few spelling / grammar issues, but overall the sequel is in much better condition than part 1. The style and presentation are much improved and the characterization is really good.

The card catalog scene was a lot of fun to read.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Found...and Lost again" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Good work.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [28 Nov 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Jedi and a Hellmouth" from RedDeathLV
Review:
Needs rewrite. Bad symbols in the middle of the text.
Comments from author:
What are you talking about? I've just checked the page and its loading correctly without any bad symbols.
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [11 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Musings in the Bronze" from CPTSkip
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Well done! I think you are doing an excellent job with the characterizations and you definitly caught the 'sense of wonder'. I look forward to more of you lovely story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of story "2 Jedi and a Hellmouth" from banner
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I just hope Lily remembers Lucas' lessons about the Force - and the hazards of the Dark Side.
I don't remember the stories very well. Could Xander feel Lily's use of the Force?
Review By [banner] • Date [9 Aug 05] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "2 Jedi and a Hellmouth" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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The formatting is definitely screwed up here, and I'd think it was a mistake instead of an effort to make the chapter look longer, if I hadn't actually read it. I honestly though you let your little sibling write this chapter for a while. I can't even let it slide because you put it out rapidly; this fic hasn't been updated in a goodly while. You can't even keep the teacher's name consistent!

Try again. Try harder.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [9 Aug 05] • Rating [1 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "2 Jedi and a Hellmouth" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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You need to change whatever text encoding you use when you upload. Your story is filled with junk characters, which is what generally happens when encoding-specific characters are used that aren't generic unicode. I know that Western (ISO Latin 1), Western (Mac OS Roman), and the generic default for Windows generally work on here. If you uploaded in one of those, and it still looks like, something's up with your computer.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [9 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 Jedi and a Hellmouth" from banner
Review:
Who's the other Jedi?
And I bet Xander *never* lets someone else use his lightsaber ever again...
Comments from author:
The other Jedi will appear in the next chapter and about the lightsaber...I got to go with you on that one :)
Review By [banner] • Date [29 Jul 05] • Not Rated
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