It is nice to see a Buffy that has a chance to put her best foot forward when meeting people, rather than one mired on violence and death. I do hope they get a chance at some happiness.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Wonderful short story!! Yet, I would have been greatly pleased with a more fleshed out tale.
Comments from author:
Much as I appreciate your comments (and I really do), constantly telling me my stories aren't long enough (especially when they're clearly stated challenge drabbles like these) isn't likely to have the effect you're looking for. =)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Not Rated
The story was really good. I never would have thought of them as a couple but you did a good job with it. I like that they had a happy ever after at the end.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Squee! *warmfuzzieswarmfuzzieswarmfuzzies* I'm glad that Allan and Buffy are getting their "Happily Ever After", this is the perfect ending for this tale. Unless there's going to be more... *looks hopeful*
Thanks for the follow-up chapter, and I like the way you've phrased it: that Alan can handle being married to Buffy, because he's faced velociraptors and lived to tell the tale, while as far as Buffy's dating record goes, Alan's a bit on the young side!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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