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Review of chapter "Like Mayonnaise and Miracle Whip" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Niiiiiice! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Like Mayonnaise and Miracle Whip" from LeaFairy
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I really liked this. The Buffy/Ian interaction was fun and pretty much perfect and the idea of her and Alan together is just so unique. Very different, but definitely interesting pairing. Great job!!

Thanks for sharing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Like Mayonnaise and Miracle Whip" from Gideon
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Nice work! It is good to see that some of Alan's friends will be able to keep up their side of the conversation and that they are not afraid to tease a little. That should help smooth over any awkwardness with some of the others.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Metal" from Gideon
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It is nice to see a Buffy that has a chance to put her best foot forward when meeting people, rather than one mired on violence and death. I do hope they get a chance at some happiness.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Like Mayonnaise and Miracle Whip" from clarityfades
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Absolutely perfect! Loved how Buffy handled Ian...& I loved that Ian enjoyed her being able to handle the banter. Hee! Now I really want to see that wedding happen. Alan/Buffy is such an intriguing pairing. Oh yeah, & I could practically hear Jeff Goldblum saying your dialogue, so great Ian voice as well! :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Like Mayonnaise and Miracle Whip" from purrfus
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Its so calm and innocent looking, and then it reaches out an grabs you and drags you into their world. Devious. Very devious.

And with all due respect to Dr. Atkins and baby sisters everywhere... Mayonnaise is just .. NO. Miracle Whip is the only way to go.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Like Mayonnaise and Miracle Whip" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Scary when Buffy and Ian get along. Even scarier would be Faith and Ian.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Wonderful short story!! Yet, I would have been greatly pleased with a more fleshed out tale.
Comments from author:
Much as I appreciate your comments (and I really do), constantly telling me my stories aren't long enough (especially when they're clearly stated challenge drabbles like these) isn't likely to have the effect you're looking for. =)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from RippersGirl
Review:
Very nice :-)
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [28 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from Lisa
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You have such a gift at taking various fandoms, throwing Buffy into them and making them so good! Really enjoyed this read!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [26 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from musiclover
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mushy but its good i like it
Review By [musiclover] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Metal" from Oranda
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It's so cute! Jurassic Park is one of my all time favorite movies. I just love Alan and he is so great with Buffy. Thank you for writing this piece.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from KnightOwl
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The story was really good. I never would have thought of them as a couple but you did a good job with it. I like that they had a happy ever after at the end.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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Awww! A wonderful ending.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal" from (Past Donor)exiled
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I am so happy you decided to do more with this story. I really liked and love the pairing. Thank you for sharing your vision and hard work.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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