Oh that is hilarious. Took me a while to stop laughing long enough that I could review. And the jumps from evidence to evidence was just awe-inspiring. Grissom so determined to show off and Brass just trying to tell him that sometimes plain old detecting is enough. So funny.
Review By [feekh] • Date [22 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
*laughs and laughs* Sometimes we all try to make things more complicated than they have to be. This is a delightful read! ~Ves
Review By [Vesica] • Date [16 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All That Work ..." from wizathogwarts
Review:
You have described exactly why I couldn't watch more than 3 eps of CSI. Repetitive, trite, boring dialog. Not yours, the shows. Your CSI stories are far more entertaining. I was laughing at Grissom long before you even got to the punch line. If you ever write for CSI, let me know and I might try watching again.
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
90 hours of all that hard work for nothing.great story.
Review By [war] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All That Work ..." from DonSample
Review:
LOL! That does seem to be the way a lot of CSI episodes go, too. After a big rigamarole involving footprints, and DNA and obscure trace chemicals, they add an "oh, by the way, you also left your finger prints all over the plastic you wrapped the body in."
Review By [DonSample] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Vesica
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