I've been hesitating a while before reading this story. I've never been much of a Jonathan-fan, and always liked BtVS more than AtS.
But I'm really glad I got round to this story eventually. You've created such a twist in this story, with Wesley being Connor, and still made sense! That's not that easy to do, so I'm definitely in awe of your skills.
I'm off to reading the next part in the series!
Review By [Mierke] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Farewell, Sunnydale" from Shieldage
Review:
Nice. Hallie tries to grant a wish, and can't, cause it's true.
Jonathon goes as Riley Finn and gets recognized by Angel and Ethan, in Los Angeles.
Awesome events, good story.
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
lovely. I really enjoyed this story and this version of truth for the prophecy. I liked ethan and jonathan's part in the story. Your writing of jonathan and pov was fit him and was amusing. I'm curious, did you connect ethan and nathan for the choice of the father son thing? the names are similar.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [17 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
WILD interpretation of the "prophecy" (fake, in canon) but believable. I supose the way things were going were *just* perverted enough for Hallie to grant a vengeance wish, and not twist it further.
OK, time for sequel. In which Wes/Connor kills Sahjan's ass. And Jonathan helps. :-)
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [16 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Passing in the Night" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Interesting story, well-written. Too bad that canon Jonathan didn't get his clue in time to get out.
VERY IMPRESSED and pleased that Jonathan has seen "Island City"!
Don't quite get who Jonathan is disguising himself.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [16 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]