hey you still alive? is this posted somewhere else or what? great start, but i would really like a finish. please?

I hope you get inspired to update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Corn crab soup::

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The nice part about being a pessimist
is that you are constantly being either
proven right or pleasantly surprised.
- George F. Will
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This is wonderful, your evil for ending this in such a way but this is still wonderful.

I really hope that you get inspired to continue this story.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

HEy how about finishing this???

I would be interested in reading more of this story. I think its cool and interesting.

not bad. could have been better but not bad. this story has the potential to be great.

update soon

tonisimone

I like the idea, but i did not like the dialog with Giles...i am assuming you were trying to be suspenseful by having Giles say "yes well i never thought to ask you in all the time blah blah blah" .....it seems like it would have been more in character for him to simply ask..her say something along the lines of why does a last name matter...then him insist because it has to go on the documents...i dunno..not trying to be so critical...it just seemed like unnecessary boring filler. I like the sword "sensing" heh..at least it will go to someone who will use it..
Are you going to finish this one?

yay cant wait to see what u come up with next, plz let there be more, what is going to happen next

Could be an interesting story. Hope you continue it.