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Review of chapter "Knight of the Sword- authors notes and disclaimer" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
This story is incredible. Every time a new chapter/story is added, I find myself going back to the begining and rereading the entire saga.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from Obsidian
Review:
Bravo, very well written. And onto the second act.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from GundumM
Review:
it's all right, nice plot, and well written
Review By [GundumM] • Date [1 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from Dragonelf
Review:
It is a really good story you have written.


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Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of
darkness, and stands between darkness and light.
-- Leonardo da Vinci
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Utterly wonderful - I was actually crying through some parts of it!
Comments from author:
I had a few tears as I wrote it. I am glad you enjoyed.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from Ansku
Review:
Intriguing :) Never heard of 'Honorverse' before, but after the first few chapters it was easy enough to understand :)
Comments from author:
Books are by David Weber, excellent author.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [16 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awsome story.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [2 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet, i love honerverse and this is one dang good story in it
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from zagan
Review:
While I absolutely don't know the Archr universe, I still really like your story and I can't wait to read the next arc.
Comments from author:
Not sure what you meant by 'Archr Universe'. This is the Honorverse, as created by David Weber, and in no way owned by me.

Glad you like it. I am working on the next arc, just life is not cooperating.

Thanks
Review By [zagan] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from PhilH
Review:
Got reminded of this story today and found it and re-read it and its still great. Any timeframe on when the sequel/next part is coming out? Hope its soon! :)
Comments from author:
Timeframe is 'when it happens', as life is not helping me right now.

I look forward to it coming out as well. My close friends and prereaders feel the same way.

Thanks
Review By [PhilH] • Date [22 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Really hoping you continue this story. I've never got on with the Honor Harrington books but this tale makes me want to go back and try again.
Comments from author:
Good series, good characters. Love them myself.

Will see what I can do for the next installment.

Thanks
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [24 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking News" from HolyKnight
Review:
Yo!!!...when you're going to UPDATE...BLOODY HELL!!!!
Comments from author:
Working on it, but personal issues have delayed it. I have a bit of a vacation coming up, so there should be something soon.
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [22 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from unicornzvi
Review:
Nice chapter, I really liked Xander's speach and the way he reached an agreement on the usage of his section of the asteroid belt. As usual a few nit picks:

1>A point is made in the books of the fact that Honor having TWO swords both of which were legitimatly "the Harrington Sword" prevented a major political headache by allowing both funerals to be conducted simultaneusly (or as close to such as is possible on two starsystems lightyears apart).

2>No weapons are allowed in the House of lords. Due to Grayson law an arangment allowing the Harrington Armsmen to enter armed was reached but Earl Harrington would still be unable to carry a sword into the house of lords.

3>There's nothing stopping Xander from actively serving as an officer of either the RMN or GSN or both while fulfiling his obligations to both Crown and Sword just as Honor Harrington did.

4>"My original family is best forgoten" isn't the kind of line Xander had as it hints at the trouble he had with them and even if he had opened up a bit he wouldn't tell the media there was something wrong with his original family which is what this line amounts to.

The Unicorn
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [8 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from unicornzvi
Review:
Very nice chapter. If Xander has both the soldier spirit and the Hyena spirit affecting him why did he join the navy instead of the marines? For that matter even without them pushing at him I'd think he'd be more suited (personality wise) to the marines.

A few nitpicks in this chapter:
1>While the Q-ship Honor Harington Destroyed in "On Basliks Station" Massed 8 million tons - as much or more as a SD it's armament was comparable to a Battlecruiser (possibly only a Heavy cruiser since it was one of Horible hempill's men who made the comparison).

2>While Xander might think of it as Honor being hounded out of the house of Lords be her enemies machiniations that's not true. Honor Knew what the result of chalanging Pavel Young in her first adress to the house of Lords would be (and had she not been able to figure it out herself White Haven's 'talk' would have explained it to her) But she decided the cost was worth it.

The Unicorn
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [8 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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