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Everybody Needs An Angel - Decisions

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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Underneath Fear." from mithrilandtj
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Interesting but confusing. Angel & company are in Los Angeles - Charmed is in San Francisco.
You never explained how one group met the other nor how they were moved to the same city.
Without those the story doesn't really work.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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