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Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Soooooo many details left out! You know you want to re-open this one!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yah still got it Tjin, sniff... Good one! I really love your Xander DC crosses!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from snakeyes
Review:
ok i know it ended and everything, but parts of your story just do not make sense and that kinda messes with the flow. Not to mention the epilogue is really kinda depressing, well all of this story is depressing your Xander characterization can not catch a break and even in the epilogue it shows that his wife died. not happy at all
Review By [snakeyes] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from IrFane
Review:
I liked the story. My compliments on adding the ending rather than abandoning it as some do when inspiration wears out.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [29 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday 7" from Vassago
Review:
Re-reading the story, this is where it all goes down in quality and believability.

Bane beating a doomsday clone? The only way that could have happened is if the doomsday clone didn't have even a fraction of the powers of the real Doomsday and didn't have the reactive adaptation. Considering that in chapter 3 he helped take down doomsday...well, this chapter just completely destroys my ability to believe the story in any way. There are too many contradictions that come into play in this chapter when you take into account previous chapters, and the next couple of chapters don't help.

Don't get me wrong, I like the story, a lot, but the inconsistencies bug me.
Comments from author:
the problem was, he DIDN'T have even a fraction of Doomsdays powers when he faced Bane, Xander has the Adaption power... but it has to build up to that point, By facing Angelus and then being sucked through the portal he had adapted enough to face off against Doomsday, but even then it wasn't enough (As Superman Still Died.) when he faced Bane all of his adaptions had worn off, he was just normal everyday Xander facing off against a Supervillain that is faster, stronger and far far far better trained.

the end result was he was splatted before his ability to adapt even came up, it was working so hard to keep him alive it never let him go on the offense.

hope that explains a bit.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Vilkath
Review:
The start up was pretty interesting and good, the end of it though the Epilogue seemed so fake and tacked on. Barely got a 'set up' skipped the whole 'middle' of the story and went to a 'and they lived unhappily ever after'.

I suppose it's better than an incomplete one shot like a lot of the Halloween costume idea stories are but I do feel this fic still failed to live up to it's potential.
Comments from author:
the end was actually written out just after the first chapter, i did have a plan for a massive fic involving the Teen Titans, Tameran, DarkSeid, Ballistic Re-Entry, League of Villains, a Near Obsession by Catwoman and the Joker losing his thumbs...

it just didn't work out and so i tagged it to the end so it at least had an ending.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Vassago
Review:
Felt very tacked on and somewhat forced. The story overall is rather interesting, though I would have liked to see how Xander changed things or why Mxyzptlk made Xander forget (beyond the boss telling him to).
Comments from author:
the end was actually written out just after the first chapter, i did have a plan for a massive fic involving the Teen Titans, Tameran, DarkSeid, Ballistic Re-Entry, League of Villains, a Near Obsession by Catwoman and the Joker losing his thumbs...

it just didn't work out and so i tagged it to the end so it at least had an ending.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Morgomir
Review:
Amazing story. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Elleria
Review:
Is good. Sad to see it end. But it was good while it lasted. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from musiclover
Review:
nice ending
Review By [musiclover] • Date [28 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from missinglink
Review:
It's an okay ending Tjin, but felt somewhat tacked on there and not really apart of the story as a whole. Seems like you didn't have the same creative juices flowing as you did for the earlier chapters. Sorry to see that as I really liked the concept and plot you were laying out. Wish there would have been more to the Bane plot before just calling it, but those are the wishes of one who cannot do what you do which is pick the right words and right order to make something many enjoy. So for what this story was and is, thank you.
Comments from author:
i know, i debated long and hard as to if i should post it or not, but in the end i wanted some questions answered without locking the entire universe in stone.

this was the end result and until such time as i can get back to this verse I'll leave it as it is.

hopefully you enjoyed the story.

-Tjin
Review By [missinglink] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Duken
Review:
Woah, fast forward.

While the epilogue itself doesn't feel rushed, posting it does; if that makes any sense.
Comments from author:
i think it does, but i wanted to wind things up and answer some questions i left hanging in chapter 8, so until i can get back to this verse i wanted a somewhat 'open' ending that wouldn't spell everything out while still answering the questions... don't know if it worked but...

Hopefully you enjoyed the story.

-Tjin
Review By [Duken] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Dragonelf
Review:
The story and the epilogue were both good. However it feels like there is a bunch of chapters missing between chapter 8 and the epilogue.

I hope you get inspired to write a sequel to this story that explains what happened between chapter 8 and the epilogue.

::Feeds the plot bunny some HIGH energy plot bunny food::
Comments from author:
i understand, and any continuation of this story will be focused on the between here, unfortunitly i don't know when or even if i'll make it to that point and i wanted something that answered some of the questions i left in chapter 8.

i hope you enjoyed the story.

-Tjin
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from espinosaca
Review:
The story and the epilogue were both good. However, they're disconnected from one another. You have Xander arrive there but then just stop and jump straight to however many years later. You give no information on his relationship with Donna other than marriage. It comes across as highly disjointed and a very dissapointing read. Before a sequel should be written I think you should come back to this and write some more about how Bats decided to trust Xander, his induction into the League, how he met Donna, their romance. That sort of stuff.
Comments from author:
I Was really unhappy leaving the story at chapter 8, it left so many loose ends that i wanted to tie at least a few up before moving away from this (In case i didn't make it back and this truly was the end of the fic.)

i wanted to show that Xander did find something worth fighting for, a family, friends and a cause even if he never found a way home.

If i do return to this verse it will be to fill in the blanks.

Thanks for the review.

-Tjin
Review By [espinosaca] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomsday Epilogue" from Jackkongmaxwell
Review:
liked the epilogue
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [Jackkongmaxwell] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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