Review of chapter "Meeting" from Lin
I like the idea, Anya wasn't quite as blunt as she could have been, she is probably a bit of a difficult character to write though...
It might have been a bit more funny and have a bit more impact on draco to have herself introduced as Anyanka (hopefully he would have learned about her in DADA) ...kinda scare the mess out of Draco to make him listen and be a bit more receptive. Are the ohter death eaters hiding him from the dark lord...did Snape or his mother ask them to? I can't see Voldy not taking every opportunity to torture him since he failed in his Mission. You said he simply didn't feel up to using magic to make the room more liveable....gotta also take into consideration he has not graduated meaning his magic can be traced if he uses it.
What about Snape, is he in hiding too...i mean he obviously can't go out in public since he's killed Dumbledore...and i can see Voldy being kinda pissed that he took over Draco's job...but still glad that Dumbledore is out of the way...
this story has a lot of potential...i hope that you continue it.
Review By [Lin
] • Date [25 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting" from cflat
Interesting idea. Please continue.
Review By [cflat
] • Date [26 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting" from Darklight
Like it very much, get Anya to get Draco to get away from both sides and start for himself, somekind of money business.
keep teh chapers coming.
Review By [Darklight
] • Date [26 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]