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Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
And here I get to cry, again. Please update.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
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Hope to see more of this soon.^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story, if you ever can please continue this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [30 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from Netchka
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I just read this again after a few years and I still love it. Thinking of continuing the story? Hope so. Can't wait for more chaps.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from bookworm
Review:
It seems unlikely by now, but if you ever find the time and inspiration to continue this...there are still people out there who'll happily read it. :-) Do keep writing, regardless of whether it's this.

Scott
Review By [bookworm] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from Godogma
Review:
This story started interestingly enough, then you started skipping large segments of story where the characters progressed offscreen and then expected the viewer to keep up or just "know" what happened as well as how you got from point A to point B, not the greatest way to write a story nor is it one I'm willing to tolerate for long so I'll give the rest of the story a miss.

The point where I stopped was where Xander was a padawan some three or four paragraphs back and then mysteriously he was taking Tara as a padawan even though he hadn't passed whatever tests there were built into the holocron for him to go to the next level. Also, you're going with a very stunted view of the force/jedi that's commonly portrayed by those who just go by the whole passionless idiosyncrasy that a vocal but very stupid part of the order followed that resulted in the death of almost the whole of the order to Vader and Palpatine.

Not my kettle of fish, but best of luck with any further writing you do.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from lunalurker
Review:
Good stuff, and fun, and an original way to have a star wars crossover! I hope this will continue someday. Thanks for writing!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from tannin
Review:
when is the next chapter comming??????
Review By [tannin] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from HolyKnight
Review:
Geez......Could you have the decency of telling the readers that you abandoned a work or what?
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from Rune
Review:
I think you have a first here, I have not seen Tara as a Jedi anywhere else. Please update this great story.
Review By [Rune] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from LordSia
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NIce. Why have you abandoned it?
Review By [LordSia] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from darthridian
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just found this story.

great writing.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from Vilkath
Review:
Interesting idea and start, it is a little sad it's incomplete with little to no chance of being finished after 2 years of no updates. I will say this is one the best 'starts' of a Star wars fic, nice gradual inclusion of the force. No Star wars characters suddenly showing up in Sunnydale or the reverse of Xander showing up in middle the republic. Both those types of cross overs almost always have issues with 'following canon with extra characters who do nothing'.

I also love that just because the one in a million chance encounter with an ancient data storage device got Xander into the ways of the Jedi does not mean suddenly all the bad guys ran into the ways of the Sith for a change. I do think the 'dark side' the force seems a bit aggressive and strong a couple thousand years later with no people to support it. Especially since it seemed to be non existent until suddenly poof a Jedi around to try and corrupt, if it's so easy and forceful why didn't it go after force sensitive people before? They seem to already exist on earth and no known ways to resist?
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from Obsidian
Review:
WOW I have to say that is the best Jedi/Xander cross I've read yet. Awesome story. thanks.
Please continue.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darkness and Light" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Interesting story so far. I look forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [1 May 09] • Not Rated
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