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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Chan
Wonders what going to happen next to galaxy in general and how things are going to play out when yoda and visitors find that yawn 4 isn't as uninhabited as they thought.
Review By [Chan] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Aista
I always needed an alternate ending to that horrible temple massacre scene. So thank you! Good suspenseful lead-up to the Whistler scene. Overall solid writing.
Review By [Aista] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from breve
you have an amazing imagination.
this story rocks.
Review By [breve] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Xayian
Read this again and still lovin it. :)
Review By [Xayian] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from BrownFinderth
Buffy with babies to care for?!! Challenging! Let's see what more Whistler gets told by the PTB's for Buffy. And will the group find anybody else on Yavin 4?
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Taryn
Awesome cliffhanger. Bastard. I'm glad you've already started the next story. Keep it up :D

Review By [Taryn] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from darkwoofe
I'm really enjoying this story. Can't wait to get started on the next part, but I wanted to let you know that I think it's going great so far. Nicely done!
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Taryn
I've read this series so many times I've lost count. I love it. But it just JUST hit me that Teal'c and Andrew were Star Wars fans. How will that affect this story? Or will those be slight tweeks to their pasts?
Review By [Taryn] • Date [25 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from lucyferr
“Whistler, I’m going to skin you alive and use your hide as diapers for the babies and use your ribs to construct crib mobiles.”
Jack winced at the morbid idea, but for some strange reason Whistler brightened. “Wonderful! You’re already planning for the long term.”

that actually did make me LOL

impressed at how trained the kids are... do the Jedis really give them military lessons that young?

Trying very hard to feel sorry for Whistler, seeing as he's just the messenger... but nope, I'm failing miserably
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from lucyferr
Buffy was surprised that Jack had let any of the kids touch a lightsaber, let alone use one. She wondered who had talked him into it or if commonsense and the children’s serious nature had won him over. She did notice that Jack was the only one carrying a blaster.

cool - glad Jack's not a slave to his memory re Charlie

lol @ constant Whistler updates
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from lucyferr
Vayla paused, blinked and looked to one of the younglings for direction. They couldn’t offer any help. Master Buffy could switch from Jedi-like to as un-Jedi-like as possible in a blink of an eye....
"Not bad, but I’d take chocolate over it any day of the week.”
Vayla was confused but remained silent. The human infant in her arms sensed her unease and started to whimper...
Vayla’s confusion increased. She looked to the other younglings but they shook their heads in helplessness. No one knew how to deal with this young Master. Perhaps the younglings should address her as ‘Knight.’ That would be proper, would it not?
“...You are only allowed to leave the ship if it catches on fire. And you are not allowed to set fire to the ship yourself. Got it?”
Vayla and the other younglings stared at the strange instructions. Who would set fire to a ship?
... “TTFN!” She jogged for the near-by jungle and pressed the button on the remote to close the door. The younglings exchanged glances.
Soon, they breathed, soon they would be in the company of a real Jedi Master.

This is hilarious... poor kiddies... though in RL, would Buffy be that ... well, Jack. Bored Jack.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from lucyferr
lol @ Whistler preparing himself.

hope that Jack and Buffy are great nonbelievers in 'dont kill the messenger'.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from lucyferr
“Ah, no. I’m a clone with the memories of a fifty-year old galaxy-hopping Air Force colonel.”
“Oh.” Dismissively, Buffy turned back to the formula and the dehydrated milk and started to measure out equal amounts. “That was my next guess.”
Jack gaped at her blasé attitude at his revelation.


also, the kids are doing well.

and it's scary that this is all just for a bet.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from lucyferr
“I know a little of healing, Master Buffy.” It did not feel correct to call her ‘Slayer’ or ‘Slayer Buffy’. ‘Master Buffy’ would have to do. Prhaps ‘Master Slayer’?
Buffy glared but ignored the title for now. She addressed the line of younglings.
... "Yes, Master Buffy," they chorused.

“Any of you any good at this healing gig?”
All four pointed to the three-year old that Jack had gone back to saved. Buffy raised an eyebrow. “Really?”
The Caamasi nodded vigorously, eager to help. Ro’hane was not surprised. His species were strong in the healing aspects of the Force.

Both very cool scenes, in parallel. I could picture 'The Caamasi nodded vigorously, eager to help' in my head though I have no idea what a three year old Caamasi would look like! :-)

Whistler's POVs are surprisingly non-annoying.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from lucyferr
She became the Slayer, the Defender of the Innocent. The Bringer of Death. Her Gift was Death and she was a generous giver.

other than the 'Defender of the Innocent' bit, that's kinda cool wording.

Ro’hane shook his head. “Surely a warrior such as yourself has a title. If not one given to you by your comrades, if you need any, than by those who are your enemies.”

good scene that.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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