Review of chapter "Beginnings" from Tamda
I hope you don't mind the out of nowhere review. It's kind of interesting, and might be worth looking over now that you've progressed as a writer. :0) It seems like an early work to me.
You might want to double space between the ending of your writing and the begining of the author notes as well, just a quick insight!
Review By [Tamda
] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Rating [3 out of 10]