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Review of chapter "Finding answers" from spring
Review:
please finish this fic I love it so far!
Review By [spring] • Date [16 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding answers" from AngellovesBuffy
Review:
more please
Review By [AngellovesBuffy] • Date [7 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding answers" from spk
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Just found this and I love it. I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned it because I would love to see the confrontation (I mean the hearing). :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding answers" from CindyB
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Very interesting. I hope you continue this fic. I'd like to see the wizarding world have to apologize to Buffy & Willow...And Giles get a new wand.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [3 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding answers" from Gylzgurl
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This story is awesome. I'm really loving it and can't wait till the next chapter. I also can't wait for the Buffy/Council interaction when they finally meet again. *grins* Please update soon.
Review By [Gylzgurl] • Date [27 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding answers" from VillageOrchid
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I like how you are starting to put in pieces of intrigue and mystery into the plot, while at the same time continuing the "tour" of the world.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry... The Vampire Slayer?" from Deadpan
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I have read this fic before. I think you posted it on ff.net. It was fairly enjoyable there, though I think I see signs of some more polishing and editing in this version. Thank you for continuing your work.

For those of you commenting on the use of "quitted". Yes it is incorect grammar. However, it is perfectly apropriate as Buffy-speak.
Comments from author:
Yes thank you, I am trying to polish a few annoying details the first version had, after I finish posting in here all the polished, corrected chapters I will re-post them on ff.net.
I am sorry to admit that "quitted" is actually a mistake, I didn't intend to put it as Buffy speak, I am a spanish speaker and sometimes I get confused with certain verbs, I think I must have forgotten to check that mistake in the first version. Thank you for not being annoying about it! Lol.
Review By [Deadpan] • Date [22 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of story "Consequences" from Lucinda
Review:
an interesting chapter, but it seems to have managed to be added three times.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [18 Sep 05] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Remembering when she was helpless" from burmafrd
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What is with this QUITTED thing- that is REALLY ANNOYING.
Review By [burmafrd] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remembering when she was helpless" from Locathah
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I humbly submit that the present and past tenses of "To Quit" are the same and that Quitted not only isn't a word, but sounds extremely wonky.

"help me when I needed them to, so, I quitted."

should be

"help me when I needed them to, so, I quit."
Review By [Locathah] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dealing with Ron" from Worldmaker
Review:
Draco/Ginny. Not as offensive or utterly from outerspace nuts as some pairings I've seen, but enough for me to automatically dislike a story.
Comments from author:
Draco and Ginny might be together but I will not make my story a pairing centered fic. This involve any other pairing that might develop through the story.
Review By [Worldmaker] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remembering when she was helpless" from MarcD
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I'm really enjoying this fic. If I could make one suggestion, that would be to inform us of whose point of view the chapter will be based on. (In one it was Buffy, the next it was Harry) We can tell once we get into the chapter, but I think it would be an easier read if we knew who it was going into the chapter.

Looking forward to your next update :-)

mjd
Review By [MarcD] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A lesson" from rpgwarrior
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I am having trouble with the idea that any group of people that understood the nature of magic and had any clue about the Hellmouth would willingly take its two most powerful guardians away for the length of time a trial like this would take. If Buffy, Willow, and Giles go off to court, then only Xander, Anya and Dawn are left in Sunnydale, and any truly significant monster could kill them if they tried to stop it. Also, who in their right mind would incarcerate the best friend of a Slayer that has been proven as capable as Buffy? I think that what would appear in her mind as kidnapping Willow and imprisoning her in a place guarded by dementors, that she would obviously consider demons, would make her willing to do anything to save Willow. I think that in Buffy's mind, any magic user that works with demons (dementors) would probably be considered evil, and thus able to be killed. It isn't like it would be the first human Buffy killed (Gwendolyn Post).
Comments from author:
Even though I like your point of view about my story, and I enjoy knowing you considered it, I can't agree with you. Though the menace of destruction would not be entirely gone, I am not planing to destroy Sunnydale while Buffy is gone, like it happened in season 6 when the demons discovered the Buffy-bot. I do believe Sunnydale would survive a few days without a slayer, after all it survived all the years before Buffy moved to Sunnydale, also I believe some of the demons might actually loose interest in Sunnydale, because some demons are not interested in Wolrd Domination, just in how to kill a slayer (Spike would be the perfect example).

Buffy being away will affect the plot of the story, but the story will not develop much in the HP world, except the whole trial.
Review By [rpgwarrior] • Date [13 Sep 05] • Rating [4 out of 10]
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