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Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from serenityselena
Review:
intriguing plot with interesting twists ....
hope you`ll continue the story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from myrddyn
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cool story please update though its been ages since you have!
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from deamon
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I love this story so far and hope to see it updated soon.
Review By [deamon] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Human Evolution" from nukeswolf
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Will there ever be more to this story? I really hope so =)
Review By [nukeswolf] • Date [10 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from Markelo
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The part with Xander facing that G'uald bitch was AWESOME!!!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from IcemanII
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Nice xander story. I really am enjoying this fic. Its a lot of fun, but you haven't updated in some time. Any chance you will continue the story.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [23 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from Jhawksun
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i dont know if you plane on writing more on this but please do. love it
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from Morgomir
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Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from QundraDraconum
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I like it. You have the scoobies give out way to detailed information very quickly, and have them tip their hand very easily, but I liked the personal interactions between the characters in the discussions. I like your take on the one who sees, I've seen him as a profiler, and a general, but seeing humanity is a first. I always thought it was more a instinctive ability to see to the root truth of things that he tends to cloud on a rational level with his own self-confidence issues, thoughts, and feelings.

Overall, good work.
Review By [QundraDraconum] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from PsychoWing
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Good story. It's a bit different from the others I've read. I have to ask though, are you planning on having Xander and Mini-Jack meet? I imagine that that would prove to be interesting.

Anyway, I hope you'll update soon.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from spring
Review:
I love this wonderful fic so far, I must ask though are you planning to complete this? Please update this wonderful fic again soon. (feeding the muse with praise)
Comments from author:
I am planning to complete this. I just have to tweak some stuff. Turns out, I have too many balls in the air with this story, and it's getting to the point that it's almost ADD. I need to weed out a couple of the minor story lines and focus on the major ones: Xander's DNA and his relationship with his dad. I HOPE the Sam/Xander ship will be workable. Glad you like it so far!!!
Review By [spring] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from Obsidian
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I like it so far. Good Story. Look forward to update.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from mikerich
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just reread this story very good .this came to me that if the Asgard are making non-sentient clones of Xander that they can take one of the eyes of a clone and surgically install it in Xander.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [19 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from (Recent Donor)jcon
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Really enjoyed your characterizations of the various persons included in the fiction. Interested to see where Cassie ends up & how if you were to finish this. Good story with action & UST.
Go You!!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [28 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Balder" from Ame
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A very interesting story.. Its a shame to see tis lain fallow for so long..
I do hope you decide to continue it at some time.
Review By [Ame] • Date [28 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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