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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Winterhart
Review:
This is a great start please update
Review By [Winterhart] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)hellmouthprincess
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Who uncloacked themselves? Is Harry dead? Are you planning some kind of time travelly but get younger at the same time thing? Wil I ever find out the answers?

Great story, would looove to see more.
Review By [(Past Donor)hellmouthprincess] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Could you please update or something? If you can? Please? I really love this concept.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from PrincessTai
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>>>“Wow,” Xander joked, “They weren’t kidding about that whole ‘destroyer’ thing were they? Haven’t see a mood killed that quickly in long time. Congrats.”“Wow,” Xander joked, “They weren’t kidding about that whole ‘destroyer’ thing were they? Haven’t see a mood killed that quickly in long time. Congrats.”

Don't EVER apologize for dialouge *giggles* Very nice. Donkey express. LOL
In character too :-D I like the fast paceness of it. It's different. Not very explainy with what's in their heads but it's obvious nonetheless. And I see Anya and Giles are a bit close as are Faith and Con. Already. And Spike and Buff. Are normal and not hurting each other love. Are you going to explain that though?

Like that CLIFFY! That is ALL kinds of wrong. Here I am so into this and then BAM! Cliffy.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
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Oh my God Angel. And Cordy. At least they can be together.
And that? Explains everything. Who was the girl calling Andrew a moron.
Faith? Or Dawn? I'm glad Cordy came to tell them though, late or not, petty or not.
It shoulda went that way on the show. Not the Angel dying, the Cordy telling. Things would have been explained better. I like it when the AI team gets help in ffs :-)
Are Wes, Linds, and Gunn alive?
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from PrincessTai
Review:
Vague yes. But it is very with the setting the scene.
Makes me wonder. How much did the world change. Is that why Snape and Anya are still alive?
And Andrew, as usual is funny :-D
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Lin
Review:
Ok, you have me interested. How long ago did harry die? or did i miss that and need to reread? I guess all will be revealed eventually.
I'm not really fond of the journal entry thing..so i hope that the majority of the story wont be in that formatt...::shrugs:: but if it is...i guess to each his own..
Review By [Lin] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from angrymonkey
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Slightly opaque, but I'm still enjoying it. I hope the story actually gets going soon though.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kiwi
Review:
it's very interesting so far. i can't wait to see where you'll take this. :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DemureButterfly
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OMG! Keep going. I am so totally hooked. BTW, snaps for the kick-a** art for this story, as well. Post soon!
Review By [DemureButterfly] • Date [26 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Kiara
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Time for what? I'm guessing we wson't find out till next chap *sigh*. I like it so far, looking forward to when we know more of what's happening. Update soon;
Kiara x
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [22 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Damia
Review:
Well it seems like a good start, and I really want to see this written because of the artwork you did for it. WRite more soon.
- Damia -
Review By [Damia] • Date [2 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Scooter
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very good beginning. A bit skitchy about the entire diary thing, those can get boring fast; no offense meant or anything, just observing. But, lotsa luck and stuff and look forward to the next update.
Review By [Scooter] • Date [12 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from cellophane
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nothing makes a story better than a monty python reference. ^_^ that's very Andrew.

though i should note, i don't generally care for stories written in a diary format. they're rarely done well - i hope you break that unfortunately tradition.

cellophane
"living vicariously since 1985."
"o frabjous day!"
Comments from author:
Don't worry, the whole thing won't be done in diary format (just the occasional entry). And you are right, it is very difficult to do, so I'm glad you like it.
Cheers, Em.
Review By [cellophane] • Date [10 Sep 05] • Not Rated
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