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Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from bernadette
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I've read other parts of this story, but never this one. I'm glad I finally did; it's beautiful and sad and the only thing I've read where the slayer was a willing sacrifice. Thank you.
Review By [bernadette] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from bradsan
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Well, reading this I can't shake the feeling that this tale is more realistic then the stories they tell us about Adam and Eve. Told and written down by men. The same goes about the tale from the first Slayer story also written and created by a man.

It explains why a lot of men are acting still the same and a lot of them think women are only good for some specific things and need to obey. Those specific men always forget we are the ones who got the abilities for multitasking and as a bonus some brains and they only got the strength and some got the brains. "giggle" Don't tell them they will be scared when they realize we are better and can think further that they can. "LOL"

very good writing, love it.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from VillageOrchid
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Certainly a long story, but I like how you didn't "wrap around" but made the Buffy characters almost an epilog.. because in the fullness of time they are barely one moment, even if they are "of the now." I also liked how Lilith tried to explain and added more questions, a sense of doubt, which probably satisfies whatever rules that higher powers have about being directly helpful.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from MarcusSLazarus
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Tricky to follow at times, but unquestionably interesting reading nevertheless; nice job.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
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Wow, that was a very interesting take on the origin of the Slayers. I very much enjoyed it. Kudos.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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*tucks into special folder on hard drive*

*bows low* Yes, THIS is the origin story of the Slayer as it should be and I'm very grateful that you decided to share it. I've enjoyed every story of yours, and your brother's, that I've read and I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this series, though I think I'm going to be spacing them out like special treats. Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [19 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from Callista
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wow. Just... wow. I agree, I like this version better than the cannon version of the creation of the first slayer. It's beautiful, and I love the style. Great story, thanks for sharing it!

Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from Javian
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Imaginative. I enjoyed it. Also added to recs.
Review By [Javian] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from Bugeyedmonster
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Added to recs
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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WOW!!!! Epic! That was an insanely interesting tale.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from lunalurker
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Wonderful, poetic, almost lyrical. A great alternate history, and the fireside style was very well done. An inspired tribute. And I'm loving the entire series that follows, for that matter.
Thank you so much for writing, and may you and your muse be well and come back with further Stories often. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from citymouse
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this is how Stories with capital S should be told
Review By [citymouse] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from lucyferr
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Clapclapclapclap!!

So the old women figured out early enough that the male Watchers were useless and still allowed them to have proximity to the Slayer? Weird.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from Vassago
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I don't much like this, mostly because the gross amounts of sexism, on both sides, there are.

That and it portrays all men as a bunch of moronic jackasses that will amount always amount to being Evil and Manipulative Assholes in the end.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lilith's Daughters" from Devi
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Wow. This was an amazing take on the whole origins of both vampires and the Slayer. I'm really impressed by the way you weaved the words together as well. The whole style had a legend/story-by-the-fire feel. There's so much I want to say about it but apparently your story has left me speechless.
Review By [Devi] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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