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Review of chapter "Evolution" from HeatherSin
Review:
Rockin' good story! Very well thought out. It seems that you have a great grasp of the DZ universe; the swaping back and forth of the visions were my favorite parts of the story.
Review By [HeatherSin] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Evolution" from ANNJ
Review:
It's really late here in Germany. But your story kept me awake until now. It was very well written and I liked your characterization of both, Johnny and Buffy. The story was wonderful, funny and gripping. Everything a good story needs.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Anja
Review By [ANNJ] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Evolution" from Chelsea
Review:
Great ending. I really enjoyed this fic!
Review By [Chelsea] • Date [7 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Evolution" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
That was really interesting but kind of sad too. Buffy still has a dead Zone thing going for her though right? And who knows maybe the PTB will give her back her powers for the apocalypse.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [7 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losing Battle" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Oh cool it sounds like Buffy had a dead zone too...only I am guessing it is her slayer powers.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [6 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Evolution" from Sandi
Review:
Oh My. What a ride. That was .... just intense. Please don't let them talk you into a sequel. It would lessen the impact of what you've got right now. Submit it for judging somewhere. Thanks for letting me take the trip.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [26 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Evolution" from Duchess
Review:
Whoa! Very very freaky, yet ultra cool. So, Johnny is a male Slayer now? Who's got the visions? Nobody?

I gave you a 9 in the rating department because of Ethan supposedly having the same sword Buffy used to send Angel to Hell and stop Acathla, which isn't possible as Angel himself has to pull the sword out and that would start the whole process all over again. There was another sword though, so perhaps Rayne was mistaken as to which he actually had? *hopeful look*

I like that Johnny and Buffy are a couple now, that's sweet. *happy sigh* The entire last part of the last chapter I'm chanting, No, no, no, no, no, no because I'm afraid they're both going to die. I thought there was a bomb rigged to explode when they opened the door, but the single crossbow bolt was nicely dealt with. *satisfied grin* How does the Slayer spirit like having a man in the lineage now? Oh boy, how will Janus and Stillson react when THEY find out? LOL!

This was a riveting story! So much so that I literally beat both my husband and "little" brother away from the computer when they thought it was their respective turns to be online, just so that I could read the whole thing in one sitting. They're both still pouting about that too, by the way. *giggle* I'm sure they'll forgive me eventually. ;)
Review By [Duchess] • Date [12 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Evolution" from LadyCarpathian
Review:
AAAAARRGG!!! You can't POSSIBLY leave it there!!!! There's still too much left unaswered!!!!!

From the hints at the end, it looks like Johnny and Buffy have switched places. Johnny is now the Slayer, but is Buffy the Psycic??? Is Buffy really powerless??? Is the Apocalypse supposed to happen so the slayers can survive??? And what was with the epiphinies at the end of the fight??? Were the PTB really trying to make Buffy fail??? Or was it all part of the plan to make her see the way to stop Utarefson???? (Nice use of nosferatu, by the way... *snikcerz*)

Please tell me that Jonny has not become Angel?? That would just.... YECCHHH!!! I like Johnny as his own person. Tho, I do like the use of Angel's perspective to give him the heads up on Buffy's life. And I can see these two coming together as the only ones to truly understand each other.

And what was with the Evolution reference in the last chapter??? The "part of one" references earlier as well??? Was that only temporary, like for the duration of the threat or what?? Is this supposed to be the evolution of the slayers??? The first male slayer???

The thing is.... If Buffy really is the Psycic to John's Slayer, why didn't she see the arrow coming???

Anywho, PLEASE tell me there is a sequel to this in the works somewhere????? I can't be the only one looking for these answers!!
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Evolution" from banner
Review:
That was exciting and complex and unexpected.
I'm going to have to think about this. A lot.
Great story.
Review By [banner] • Date [7 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Evolution" from onlimain
Review:
Wow. This story was amazing! There were scenes that I never saw coming. Just one thing: in the end scene, does that mean that Johnny kept the slayer powers and Buffy kept the visions? Other than that, this was a great read, so thank you. I hope to read more of your work soon.
Comments from author:
That's about it with a whole lot of strings attached. :)
Review By [onlimain] • Date [6 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Destined" from onlimain
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I like this chapter. It explained a lot. And I love how you made the connection between Buffy and Johnny plausible. I look forward to reading what happens next.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [30 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Destined" from vampygal
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I like the story. I'm all of the time fan of Dead Zone, so feel rather lost occasionally. I give you kudos for having the guts to post your writing. I'm still just a reader. Keep up the good work.
Review By [vampygal] • Date [30 Sep 05] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attack" from Fan2
Review:
Okay I think Johnny is channeled Angel's soul. That the end of Angel has occured and that Johnny now is Angel. He shanshu'd. It's a good story. Even if I am not even close!!!
Comments from author:
That is an excellent idea!
Review By [Fan2] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attack" from onlimain
Review:
I'm so glad you're continuing this story; I like it. So, in Buffy's dreams, it wasn't really him? Was it just a push from the PtB? And in Johnny's visions, why is he always Angel? Is Ethan turning everyone into a vampire? Is that why the vampire dust spread out all over the town? If he is, is it only temporary, like his other spells? If so... boy, are Buffy and Johnny going to be feeling guilty. It's not their fault, though. They didn't know. (Or course, that's only if that was what Ethan was doing.) Someone really needs to stop Ethan. I look forward to your next chapter.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [23 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attack" from banner
Review:
This is getting for exciting and confusing all the time.
I love it...
Review By [banner] • Date [23 Sep 05] • Not Rated
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