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Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I'd never seen this before but I have to say that after what happened the previous summer that Buffy is intitled to knock him unconscious for pointing a gun at her.
Comments from author:
I can see your point, but you also have to take into account that, from Martin's viewpoint, Buffy attacked him without any provocation whatsoever, so he was just defending himself against someone he had just been told was superhumanly strong and fast, and who was apparently a 'hit first, talk later - maybe' type of person.

Buffy has always needed to work on her interpersonal skills and tone down her arrogance a bit.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from spring
Review:
This is a wonderful sequel to Potential Weapon, I have to wonder if you are going to write more in this area of crossovers? Again so that you are not confused I love this fic.
Comments from author:
As I noted in the previous review, I'm working on the next part of this and it should be available to post soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from FairyQilan
Review:
Lol. This series is great. Hurt spike some more please. Fire is looking real good right now.
Comments from author:
Well, I can't promise you anything definite, but have Riggs and Murtaugh ever gone anywhere without leaving a trail of devastation behind them? ;-)

I don't know exactly when this will be updated, 'cause my muse has been very finicky lately.
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from Elleria
Review:
Very amusing. Looking forward to the next one in this series.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you liked it.

Not exactly sure when the next one will show up - my muse has been kinda finicky lately. ;-(
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from RedDeathLV
Review:
Very promising story.

A tip, though: You may want to add this to "Potential Weapon" as a second chapter, since this isn't actually a sequel.

Looking forward to the next installment!
Comments from author:
Thanks. As far as being a second chapter, I consider theses stories to be like episodes, each adding a part to the overall story.
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from Zorro
Review:
A mostly interesting story, up until buffy entered the scene. To have buffy fail to disarm a fellow with a smoking gun in his hand, or to have said fellow being slammed against a wall by buffy be able to draw on her, and have buffy meekly back down, made me basically go meh! and stop enjoying the fic.
Comments from author:
If you'll recall, by that point in the series, Buffy had already begun her "I'm the Slayer, I'm better than mere humans because I have the power" shtick, so I see her as being almost contemptuous of anyone she meets as far as considering them a threat.

As far as Martin drawing on her and her backing down, I'll just point out that he already had the pistol in his hand, so he didn't need to draw it, just point it at her. I also made a point of noting that Buffy was remembering the previous spring, when Warren almost killed her and did kill Tara with a pistol. I think that the psychological blow she'd face from suddenly having a gun at her throat would be quite unnerving.

It seems you disagree about the combination of factors, so I'll just say that we view things differently.

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [Zorro] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon 2 - Lock and Load" from Lucinda
Review:
"Oh, and Uncle Martin," he added placatingly over his shoulder, "I just want you to know that Spike's *definitely* not one of my friends."

lol.... yeah, Xander has never considered Spike to be one of his friends. Very amusing story so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate the FB.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [17 Sep 05] • Not Rated
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