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New Beginnings: Kindred Laws

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Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Reward" from Tempe
Review:
WOW. This part was very different and extremely detailed. Honestly I loved it. Although, having seen that the next portion is an Anita Blake crossover, I'm curious on how that's going to work with the age gap. Will they be resting in the past? Guess I'll just have to read to find out. Great work!
Comments from author:
The difference between the stories, that's how I wanted it. The first was a love story, the second, "Creature of the Night" which wasn't written, was about fighting between the Kindred. "Warriors" is mostly suspense, mystery and about power. If you read any of my others stories, you will note the difference in the writing and the story themselves.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Reward" from deathgeonous
Review:
Very nice. Thanks for writing this, good bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you for each of your reviews. I am glad you like this. Yes this story will continue. I have at least four more chapters to post. I love it when someone reads my old stories- Thanks.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Reward" from Obsidian
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I like it. The Best Buffy/Kindred crossover I have read yet. Thank you. Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Wow! Someone still reading my old stories....Thank you. I tried to stay true to my own vision of the show.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [7 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Reward" from JenC
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I don't know how I did it, but I stumbled upon this story first. I will have to go back and read New Beginnings. I have the DVD's for The Kindred, but have yet to watch them, so this story intrigued me. I really liked it. I liked the fact that it was real. Buffy was powerful, but not too. She had a boss. But she was a boss. It was very well done. I would have liked to have seen some of their children. Maybe in a back story I missed? I am a romantic at heart, so I missed that there wasn't more romance and family in this story, but I also love a good mystery. And sometimes there isn't much romance in those. I can't wait to see what the world will be like when they wake up.

Jen
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. Yes the story will continue. I start writing this story in 2004. Yes that long ago, however life happens. I had written ten chapters so far. I will review each chapter, making sure it is worthwhile to send to my beta. In the meawhile, please check out my other stories.
Review By [JenC] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Reward" from (Current Donor)romero
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Oh my!! What an ending! Buffy and Julian will rest but the world will be much worse when they awake. I'm glad that Buffy was able to see what the other Buffy's life was like (love the fact that Spike, Angel and Buffy were an unit). I really enjoy reading this series of stories and I hope that you continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you for sticking by me all these months and yes this will continue into a least one story which i had already wrote 16 chapters.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Kindred Laws" from LordCorwin
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Just read everything, and I must say .. quite interesting ... very very interesting..
Comments from author:
Thank you..
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Kindred Laws" from (Current Donor)romero
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I had chills reading this chapter. You did a wonderful job with the verbal and physical confrontation. Poor Burke Levy and his family. After Buffy fought and won I hope that the all Kindred are reminded of her strength and respect her.
Comments from author:
Thanks for staying with me through the end.. one more chapter to go.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Double Jeopardy" from (Current Donor)romero
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I thought this was a exciting update. I was surprised that only a few know of the bond between Lissa and Julian. I can see that Buffy feels insecure about what she is and where does she fit in. I like how Victor protected Buffy and was able to shift. Sabine is one sick vampire. Yahoo..Julian made it in time to take care of Sabine..that is if Buffy will let him. I'm looking forward to reading the next update.
Comments from author:
Thank you. regarding the bond. Why few people knows was because, it can be used against them. Will update after christmas...
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [16 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9: Roller Coaster" from (Current Donor)romero
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Julian and Buffy are both aphla's and are bound to have territorial disputes when the slayer is involved. Hey! Dru is in town and I'm wondering if she's doing the dirty work or if someone is manipulating or helping her..There has to be a guy involved as the victims were raped. I know that Dru, Angelus or Riley all have issues with Buffy and now the Lillie's daughter is in the picture, she'll be a candidate who may want revenge too. Gee, so many questions....I'm always happy to see an update for this series as it's one of my favorites.
Comments from author:
"There has to be a guy involved as the victims were raped." Not necessarily. The men had sexual intercourse, but the one female that was killed was raped!. And she was bitten by several vampires, so yes she was attacked by a group of people but the men was killed by one person. Angelus and Riley doesn't not exists in this story. Different dimensions.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [3 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Kindred Laws" from shimaspawn
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The actual Kindred Laws:

The First Tradition: The Masquerade.
Thou shall not reveal thy true nature to those not of the Blood. Doing such shall renounce thy claims of Blood.

The Second Tradition: The Domain.
Thy domain is thine own concern. All others owe thee respect while in it. None may challenge thy word while in thy domain.

The Third Tradition: The Progeny.
Thou shall only Sire another with the permission of thine elder. If thou createst another without thine Elder's leave, both thou and thy Progeny shall be slain.

The Fourth Tradition: The Accounting.
Those thou create are thine own children. Until thy Progeny shall be Released, thou shall command them in all things. Their sins are thine to endure.

The Fifth Tradition: Hospitality.
Honor one another's domain. When thou comest to a foreign city, thou shall present thyself to the one who ruleth there. Without the word of acceptance, thou art nothing.

The Sixth Tradition: Destruction.
Thou art forbidden to destroy another of thy kind. The right of destruction belongest only to thine Elder. Only the Eldest among thee shall call the Blood Hunt.


Just in case you were wondering.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I found it several month ago. And i wrote it in the story.. thank you once again.
Review By [shimaspawn] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Kindred Laws" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
Yahoo!! I'm so glad to see another chapter to this story. It seems that Buffy is beginning to get the picture that the killings could be connected to her. I think Julian will have his hands full trying to get all the Primogens together and change the old laws. The South America connection still makes me think of Dru but also Riley went down there (I'll have to go back and read to see if Riley is dead) as we know he had a penchant for vamp suckage and who knows if he was changed.. Well, I'll just have to wait and see...
Comments from author:
thank you! Because of your commets about Dru, that gave me an idea about the story. However, this story takes place in the waaaaaaaay future that the scobbies and others are no longer living. (i.e. Buffy is immortal.) And yes Riley is alive and kicking. AAAh. I like riley but I'm still a fan of Buffy and Angel minus Spike. You have to wait and see about everything else.
Lotusja
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Kindred Laws" from Chosenfire
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I love this series. I am a big fan of Kindred and Buffy and to see these two worlds merge is beautiful. I t would be great to see some other members of the old scooby gang make an apperance, I think Dawn would fit so well into this story and make Buffy appear younger.
Comments from author:
Thank You for your review. I written this crossover because I'm fan of both show. However this story is A.U. and the scoobies had died in my previous story. See: NEW Beginings. And I have no reason to put them in this universe. Because my story take place in season 3, there's no Dawn. She doesn't exists. After the end of this story, I will continued in the Anita Universe. Maybe, just maybe the scoobies can enter into this universe.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [15 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Another Crime Scene!" from (Current Donor)romero
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Buffy maybe having an inkling that the murders are related to her. When you said the drug was from South America my first thought was Dru so I'm looking forward to seeing what other clues there might be. I though it was funny how everyone jumped to get coffee for Buffy and how much she still enjoys it. It will be interesting to see what changes Julian will make in the laws and also to find out why the other people in Buffy's team are keeping secrets.
Comments from author:
Thank You for another review. This story was getting stagnant to me, but you spark a fire in me, so i have to re-work this story a little bit. thanks once again...
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [8 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Home" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
Thank you for the great update.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [17 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Crime Scene" from Cristina
Review:
now how did I missed this. And I loved your story new beginnings bad bad me anyway I love it!
Comments from author:
Thank You. The first story was a love story, but this one is different. It is a small mystery.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [4 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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