That was great. I loved how freaked Bill & Sirius got while Dawn & Giles just kinda went with. My favorite line--“Bill calm down, Dawn is very accustomed to being kidnapped, I’m sure she’s fine.” Giles said, fighting down the familiar worry in his stomach. It just struck me as something so Gile-sy to say. Great!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it! Gotta love Giles! Thanks for reviewing; Kiara xx
Review By [sevangel] • Date [29 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was great. I loved forgotten past and this was a good look into Dawn(lily) confronting her sister. I like that you didn't make it violent and all about Dawn beating Vernon up. That's not Dawn (though if she took Buffy with her that's probably what would have happened). The next parts look to be interesting. You asked for suggestions, so I have one.
A Dawn kiddnapping. It's what Dawn's best known for. Plus it would be neat to see everyone's different reactions. Buffy being all pissed. Seeing how Harry, Sirius, and Bill all react. So, if you want, there it is.
Thanks for the great fics to read
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback. I like the idea of a Dawn kidnapping or possibly a Dawn injury story- I'll try and do one, thanks! Kiara xx
Review By [sevangel] • Date [18 Sep 05] • Not Rated