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Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Very good. One of the better csi crossovers I've read.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from starwolf
Review:
well done, you kept this very much true to the characters.
thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from serenityselena
Review:
nice chapter ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from Scrappychic
Review:
Great story. I loved the inner monologue Buffy and Gil each have and their thoughts about each other. I loved that, though they are willing to see where this leads, they weren't immediately jumping on the Daddy/Daughter bandwagon. This is my biggest pet peeve about Real Family fics, when the characters are, not only accepting, but completely lovey-dovey, acting like a perfect little family. It doesn't usually work that way, trust me. I met my bio dad at 25 and my thought process was very similar to Buffy's in your story - minus the supernatural aspect of course. lol I had a Dad that I didn't have much contact with in recent years due to moving across country, but still loved very much. Meetings were very awkward with bio dad for quite some time before they became more natural. I love that your story shows that awkwardness but willingness to try. It all rings very true to me.

Great job!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I always try to go for realism when I can; and I'm pleased to hear the character dynamics rang true for you here.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
This was a wonderful way to end the story but I really hope you add another one with Dawn thrown in the mix
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from DianeCastle
Review:
I'm glad you finally had the time (and attention from your muse) to bring this story to a culmination. I read the first chapters a while ago and was disappointed it was unfinished. Nice work!
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rest is Still Unwritten" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nice . . . ! Especially the 'Buffy [and Dawn] has a grandmother!' discovery. Wonder how Gil's mother would feel about having TWO granddaughters for the price of one, thanks to monkly magical manipulation?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from AllenPitt
Review:
Good conclusion to the story. Next up, Buffy introduces Dawn? Who is maybe ALSO his daughter, genetically?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Intriguing idea. Really would have liked more interaction between Buffy and Gil, but I like the premise.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nope, NEVER boring! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from CindyB
Review:
I am really enjoying this story. I think Gil being Buffy's father is very interesting. Although, I am not sure Sara going to lunch with them is a good idea. She is a very offputting person and I can't see her and Buffy getting along. Well, whatever happens next, I can't wait to read it.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from serenityselena
Review:
convenient timing indeed....
though I`m glad things went so well... they deserve to be happy too ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from Greywizard
Review:
Very, very nice, and a satisfying conclusion to this particular story.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from Alkeni
Review:
interesting
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Amazingly Convenient Timing" from MarcusRowland
Review:
They seem oddly accepting - more mojo at work?
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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