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Review of chapter "Ambush" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
Overall I like your story. Do you have plans to continue it? Or has it been abandoned?

In response to your reply: Yes, I would very much like to see your additional chapters.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I much appreciate it.

Actually, I wrote several more chapters - including departure from the Potterverse - while convalescing from knee surgery. Then, I've had to work ridiculous hours at work and home to get my finances and house back on track. I'd provide a list of what has broken in the house, but a list of what hasn't is much, much shorter.

It's been awhile, but I could pull them out, clean them up, and post them. I really didn't know if anyone besides me would be interested.
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [18 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ambush" from Ezmerelda
Review:
This is a very interesting story! Your OC, Dr. Cole, is an interesting character in his own right, and his interactions with the various 'verses has been very well handled. His arguments for using guns were very good, also. Buffy's simplistic, "guns are bad" view has always bugged me. Good to see that you're not going to let that stand here.

Can't wait to see what happens when the students arrive, something tells me that it's Harry Dumbledore is waiting for.

Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [1 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ambush" from Magneto
Review:
Pretty good. Effective writing. This chapter really moves along. More interaction between xover characters? And where is Voldemort?
Review By [Magneto] • Date [11 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mission Begins" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Surprising development. :-) I wonder who was it that night with the doctor?! *grin*
Buffy in battle mode should be able to dodge a spell, if not now than in future with no problems. And surrounded by strange men, shouldn't they have take up some defences? :-/
How does Willow know about Voldemort? Can't await to see what will happen.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [10 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mission Begins" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Pretty good start of a story. The characters were pretty much in character, and it was well written.

The "mystery guest" is a pretty interesting twist, too.

If Buffy ever gets hit with a Cruciatus again, have them be quite surprised when she rips off their heads for it. It's only *pain*. And HP spells are really quite slow and dodgable even by wizards in the Potterverse. How much more so now that Buffy is aware of them.
Comments from author:
Thanks much for the feedback! Yeah, I kind of see it that way, too. She would likely only be surprised once - simply because she didn't know - or didn't remember (!) - what the wands do. Anyway, on to the next one!!
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [10 Oct 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mission Begins" from banner
Review:
And the surprises keep coming...
Review By [banner] • Date [10 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Scoobies" from banner
Review:
Interesting setup. The characterizations are perfect.
I look forwards to more.
Review By [banner] • Date [3 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Accidental Meeting" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Interesting start. So you made The First a little less powerful, as I have thought he would be able to travel dimensions before. With Buffy not there, will the balance allow him to do anything? I wonder if they will travel to this dimension and meet their conterparts. I look forward how this will continue.
Comments from author:
Hmm. I didn't really see The First as having interdimensional capabilities. I may have misinterpretted the First in the BtVS series, but I didn't deliberately downgrade it - in fact, I intend to make it somewhat more powerful. Oh, and thanks for the kind words! I'm just having fun writing it.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [25 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Accidental Meeting" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent beginning. I can't wait to see where you take this story. Nice job with everyones' characters and speech patterns.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Not Rated
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