I love the way you mixed these fandoms! I think you did a great job, and I can totally picture every one of the situations as you layed them out. Good job! The only thing I could suggest is that you might check your grammar- a couple things seemed a little off, but maybe that's just me. Two thumbs up! Are you planning on expanding any of these into longer fics?
Review By [TrekkerSlayerette] • Date [7 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Thanks for answering my challenge. I think my favorites were Cordy as the ethereal fashion police, Lorn's escape, Illyria gets smoochies, and, best of the best, Sweet makes the Wraith sing showtunes!
Review of chapter "Army vs. Air Force" from RedDeathLV
Review:
500 words does not make an acceptable five chapters. 500 words is barely enough to be half of ONE chapter. Needs bigger sized chapters or condense these chapters into one.
Comments from author:
It's called drabbling, as was required for the challenge. I'm sorry if that wasn't clear.
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [27 Sep 05] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fashion and Acronyms" from Bill
Review:
LOL! Very well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bill] • Date [27 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]