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Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from Aista
Review:
This was fantastic.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Aista] • Date [6 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from Selonianth
Review:
Anne took one look at the arrogant man O'Neill had told her was taking her with him unless she joined the Tok'Ra and snorted. The man was a fool.

"What's so funny," the man, Maybourne, questioned.

"The fact you think you'll learn anything from me, even if you cut me up. You are nothing but an ignorant, arrogant, evil man and I'll enjoy watching you die."

"What's that-" Maybourne began when Anne's open palm slapped a point on his chest. The NID officer gasped, suddenly unable to breath. His last sight was of Anne's face staring down at him.

Anne felt no guilt at her part in the colonel's death. She had tapped a weak point in his ribcage, presumably there as a result of earlier combat, his lungs had collapsed leaving him to suffocate. Putting a horrified look on her face Anne ran to the door of the room Maybourne had insisted have no video cameras and screamed for help.

Edit: Meh, that's not what that is. That's just a Buffy more willing to kill human evil doing her job.

Edit 2: You're right, but just because it's not her job doesn't mean much. She's not in her world, she's not the same person, etc. I just don't see why, when confronted with blatant human evil such as Maybourne, that she would just let him do anything.

Also, I do like the fic, a lot.
Comments from author:
This isn't a 'Buffy kicks ass and takes names' kinda series so alas that won't be the direction of the next short should it ever get written. Thank you for reading.

Edit: It's not her job to police humanity, but I suspect you could care less about my opinion. So all the best and hopefully you find a story more to you're liking next time!
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from starwolf
Review:
yeah the NID needs to be taken down. the Tok’ra don't have the best track record either but she would be safe working with Jacob.
I hope to see more of this. thanks
Comments from author:
The NID aren't the nicest of sorts and you're very right about the Tok'ra as well, but she would be around at least one friendly face.

Not sure if there will be more, but it does remain rather unfinished doesn't it? Hmm.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Awesome short story!! Would have appreciated the author continuing writing it, as I wanted to see how Stargate intervened on Buffy's behalf with Col Mayburne!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I doubt I'll be continuing this series though. The fourth story is written, but my muse stalled on the third and never recovered.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from Vickzie
Review:
Poor Buffy. It's a shame the story had to end there though
Comments from author:
I would say things are looking up for Buffy. I have a fourth story to this series, but the third remains to be written. Sorry!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from AtotheM
Review:
Great story! Love how Anne and Jacob interact and the idea of Sokar and Glory being mates. Very well done. I'd love to see more, you have all of the characters all acting exactly as they should. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I had the most fun writing the moments between Anne and Jacob. I'm not sure if they'll ever be more, but thank you for the compliment!
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from bradsan
Review:
very good story. I only wished you wrote one more chapter. Or a Sequel perhaps.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I wish there'd been one more story myself, but alas the muse moved on from this 'verse. That's not to say it won't eventually return to it. :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from stahchild
Review:
Oh wow! That was absolutely heartbreaking. Poor buffy/anne, so much hurt for one so young, and now those animals @ NID want a go at her :( i hoped to read how the Tokra get involved... But i think this was enough anyway. Wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. The NID tend to be heartless SOBs with their own agendas. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [stahchild] • Date [13 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very good read, thank you. now i'll try to find the rest of this tale.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Sorry, but all that is posted is all that I have written for this series.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Hope" from LetsRandom
Review:
Great read, thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you end up posting a 3rd part to this story!
Comments from author:
I have another section written, but I'm not entirely happy with it so the posting is a long time coming. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from wyvernwolf
Review:
I can't believe I never left a review for this. It's one of my favourite Buffy/Stargate stories. Very well written and I love the gritty feel of it. Your characterisation of Buffy is very appealing. She's older and definitely more hardened but it's easy to tell that it's still her.

Buffy's line, “I was twenty.” just about killed me. So much pain and loss in so few words.

This was a pleasure to read and if (but I hope it's more like when) your muse finally cooperates and lets you write the third part, I'll definitely be reading it.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I have the third part written, but it's no longer up to my standards of writing so I think it'll require a rewrite, and so will this series, before I will post it. I had so many plans for this series, but I think I need to finish a few of my other WIPs before coming back to this one. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [wyvernwolf] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from Dapsy
Review:
Hey Ava,

I know you finished it writing it 2 years ago, not even sure if you read reviews for this story anymore.... but I got to tell you, you did great job with it. Also the ending make it seem as if the story might have some more parts coming in the future... maybe. Well, if you do write continuation to this story... I will read them ^_^


Now, since I like this story so much I will go and read some other stories written by you :)

Bye for now.
Comments from author:
I read reviews for all my stories and thank you. There is more, but unfortunately I might have written the forth story in this series before the third and it's made my muse kick in her heels in regards to focusing on the third story. Instead I've been working on the forth in an attempt to flesh it out enough so that people know what's happened between the two stories without me resorting to 'flashbacks.'

And thank you again! Hopefully you'll find more that you like!
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from Wannabe
Review:
I'd love to see a sequel to this story, it's brilliant. :)
Review By [Wannabe] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from merkaba
Review:
I just found this story. I've read quite a bit of your stuff and am not sure how I missed this one. I really enjoyed the characters and your writing. I loved how you got everyone together is a believable way. I would love to see more. You left us with so many questions... How will the evil NID be put in its place once more? Will it be Jack or Buffy that gets to thump Maybourne? Will Buffy and Daniel find sparks flowing between them? Any chance you will revisit this story and answer any of those questions?
Review By [merkaba] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Truths" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Some stories are just wrong. this is one.

In this reality clearly the president is a bad guy and that is no acceptable since the
NID was always a joke since no organization like that would last before it made too many
enemies. The NID was alwasy the weakest link in Stargate's story line.

For anyone with any kind of conscience to allow that to happen to a sentient being
disgusts me- as this story does.
Comments from author:
What is the purpose of reprimanding me for following canon?

I'm sorry that you disagree with how the show handled certian aspects of civilization and goverment but since I like to stick to canon you're going to find those less tolerable aspects of the shows in my work. Just a friendly warning since you haven't found one story I've written that you've liked.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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