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Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Intersting idea, but there are two things that are not so good:
1. Xander as Kitty's cousin. Willow would have been a much better choice, because they are both jewish.
2. Removing the 'Zeppo status' from Xander, because he would not be Xander if he is not the Zeppo.
Comments from author:
Kitty says that her cousin's name is Jon and that he now has four arms so I'm not really getting how you jumped to the conclusion that Xander is Kitty's cousin seeing as his mutation is more along the lines of a felinoid animorph mutation with some extras from Soldier-boy. Kitty's cousin is in fact Jonathan Levinson, who is Jewish.
As for removing the 'Zeppo' status from Xander, seeing as this was little more than a snippet that status may or may not have changed. There are a lot of ways that Xander could have remained the Zeppo of the group I just didn't get into them. Yes, Xander received some pretty cool upgrades but I made it pretty apparent that Buffy is still more powerful than him physically, he's where she was *before* the changes, and Willow got a serious upgrade on the mojo which puts her even further ahead of Xander on that front than before. Of the three he is still the least powerful. *All* of the students were changed in some manner so there was no way that Xander could have remained the token human. Plus, frankly, I always felt that he had the potential to be far more than the writers ever allowed him, or any other male on the show for that matter, to be. Overall I enjoyed the show but I never liked it's message of "females good, males incompetent/evil" and being as I'm female that's not male pride/machismo/whatever speaking.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [27 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Corris
Review:
I'd actually like to see a story out of this, maybe even go farther and have most of the town turn out to be mutants, though the adults are slower to change and probably not as drasticly.
Review By [Corris] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from banner
Review:
I just reread this story, and it still grabs my imagination. There are so many possibilities. I hope your muse leads you back to this 'verse. It's a fascinating idea. For one thing, would a vampire whose mutation had never activated while he was alive be affected?
Review By [banner] • Date [22 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Corris
Review:
Very cool, and seems like it could be a possible set up for an even longer story, or series.
Review By [Corris] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Markelo
Review:
Nice mixing of the two universes. So are the kids going to move to the Institution?
Review By [Markelo] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from FireWolfe
Review:
This should be a series.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Nomma
Review:
This is an excellent piece of fanfic.
Review By [Nomma] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Kateydidnt
Review:
I really wish you would continue this or expand it, it is a fantastic idea!
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from foreverdead
Review:
This is good I could easily see you expanding this into a full story. Have you considered it?
Review By [foreverdead] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from sjdillon
Review:
Please sir I want some more.
Review By [sjdillon] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from kaelblack
Review:
This is a really good start. It has great potential. I hope you continue it.
Review By [kaelblack] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will be inspired to turn this into a series or at least be inspired to write a sequel.

::Feeds the plot-bunnies::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Not bad. Xavier accidentally merged latent magic into their DNA? The Mayor is surely annoyed and Faith will be *way* outclassed.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from musiclover
Review:
pretty darn good i cant spell the word i was thinking about are you doing to do more
Review By [musiclover] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children of the Hellmouth" from Infinix
Review:
Excellent story and leaves plenty of room for a sequal. "Come visit Sunnydale, Ca a mutant friendly community." This also adds some protection for the hellmouth.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [11 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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