I don't know that I can give you tons of kudos on the plot, 'cause I always get sad when you kill off Buffy, but I do have to say that YAY!!! for Lt. Eve Dallas. I love the In Death series, and this is the first crossover with it that I've seen. Fantastic. Anymore you want to write, either on this or on another In death story would be fantastic!! Good job.

I'm not usually fond of drabbles, but I like your subject and your style. Can't wait to read a longer fic by you.

Boy, Eve's gonna be *pissed* that Faith was following her, and that a civilian rescued her...

Damit, I'm sorry to give a bad review, and over only one thing really, but your stories can be improved alot more if you actually took the time to do this - MAKE THEM ACTUAL CHAPTERS AND NOT JUST DRABBLES! This story has alot of potiontiol, and your scuzzing that potiontiol by only doing drabbles. How everyone get to the point of sharing 'yes, vamps and other nightmares are actually real' - you didn't even make a drabble about that before doing this one. your ruining your own story.

You really have Faith's voice down perfectly.

This is a good story, but it seems like your doing it an injustice by only writeing it in drabbles. Expand on it and write more and it would be so much better.

Same text in last two chapters

Now *that's* a surprise.

Faith's record does look bad. It was a long time ago, though.

Faith's cynicism is so much a part of her...

Cool crossover. I look forward to seeing where this goes. I'd also love to see one that has long chapters *hint, hint* regardless this is good.

Interesting start.