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Review of chapter "5. chance" from spring
Review:
I love it so far I must ask are you planing to ever finishing this?
Review By [spring] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5. chance" from banner
Review:
How did I miss this story? It looks good - interesting setup, and you've got a good grip on characters.
Review By [banner] • Date [13 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5. chance" from Crydwyn
Review:
It's an interesting story, would love to read more, it's just a pity you haven't updated in more than a year. Ah well, I'll track it anyway in the vain hope you'll continue :D
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [19 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5. chance" from AnonymouslyYoursMe
Review:
OMG!!! that last chappie was dinamite and you are correct it is a cliffie, so get your butt back into the computer chair and write me a update.
Saor
Review By [AnonymouslyYoursMe] • Date [15 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5. chance" from purrfus
Review:
Different but interesting setup. More please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [4 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5. chance" from Fooo
Review:
Any chance you'll take this up again?

Thanks.
Comments from author:
The chances are kinda slim. sorry. but I will try. I'm just really incredibly stuck.
Review By [Fooo] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5. chance" from morange
Review:
Please dont just leave this hanging like this! i like it and i hope you write some more on it :)
Morrie
Review By [morange] • Date [26 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5. chance" from hand
Review:
Don't stop there. You totally need to update this story. It's good and there aren't nearly enough Dawn/Stargate crosses.

Please continue!
Comments from author:
I'm working on it, I swear. I just got into a groove on my vacation, and then suddenly I didn't have as much time anymore. But I am working on it, and I am gonna finish it. Just maybe not as soon as one might wish.

Thanks for the encouragement, it means a lot to me.
Review By [hand] • Date [9 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5. chance" from Duchess
Review:
This is an interesting little fic and I am intrigued enough to keep reading and see where you go with it. Longer chapters would be nice though. *g* Please do post again soon? :)
Comments from author:
I'll try, thanks for the review :)
Review By [Duchess] • Date [9 Oct 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5. chance" from banner
Review:
I just foune this story - and I'm having a lot of fun reading it.
(Dawn sneaking around an AF base, looking incredibly suspicious...)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like! Thanks for reviewing :)
Review By [banner] • Date [9 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5. chance" from NoLifeKing
Review:
The story seems to start now, yeah! :-) I really hope you were jesting about not knowing what will happen. ;-)

With the Stargate open, will they think she is an alien? *grin* What will Jack think, as she was able to come here with no problem of being detected, she could have come the other way too. Hehheh. Have they seen her puzzled expression?
Wonder what would happen if they ask her how old she is with a lying detector or if they want the technologie for her invisibility. Lol, just thinking.

As for the empty elevator and people wondering. Haven't SGC encountered some foes with the ability to become invisible by technology? And maybe she should have folllowed someone with it, as you require a keycard with a code to get this deep into SGC. ;-)

I really hope you continue this, after the first cliffhanger should come a second one and so on. *grin*
Comments from author:
I was sadly not jesting. I'm pretty much just writing on the fly.

You'll have to read to find out ;)

I think she walked in just as someone else got out, and they figured it must have been a technical error or something. And even if you know it's possible to be invisible, it's still not something you really consider in your everyday life.

That's the plan :)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [8 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4. Chance" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Cool. Go for the next Chapter. And I personally have no problems with shorter chapters.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked :)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [6 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4. Chance" from Teldra
Review:
Invis in the trunk...*chortles* More soon please :D
Comments from author:
glad you liked! I'll try to keep 'em coming :D
Review By [Teldra] • Date [6 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4. Chance" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay. Nice bit of emotional build up and interplay in chapter 3, and fairly good interior narrative in chapter 4. The story is a little too simple for my tastes, it feels like a "one of my first stories" kind of writing. As such, it is nice and fairly well done for an early endevour, but nothing "great" in comparison to "all" fiction writing. Certainly a worthy sign that the author continue with his or her writings.
Comments from author:
uhm, thanks? I am gonna work a real plot in here, I've just gotta make it happen at a natural point, if you know what I mean. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4. Chance" from NoLifeKing
Review:
You have a way to build up the tension. Now I'm curious what will happen with Dawn in the SGC.
How much magic she studied? I believe invisible spell isn't beginners level. ;-)
Btw, I love that you update so fast. :-)
Comments from author:
Well, she did study all day, every day for several days, and with her natural aptitude, I figure it's just about enough. I'll try to keep them coming at the same pace :)

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [5 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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