I love it so far I must ask are you planing to ever finishing this?

How did I miss this story? It looks good - interesting setup, and you've got a good grip on characters.

It's an interesting story, would love to read more, it's just a pity you haven't updated in more than a year. Ah well, I'll track it anyway in the vain hope you'll continue :D

OMG!!! that last chappie was dinamite and you are correct it is a cliffie, so get your butt back into the computer chair and write me a update.
Saor

Different but interesting setup. More please.

Any chance you'll take this up again?

Thanks.

The chances are kinda slim. sorry. but I will try. I'm just really incredibly stuck.

Please dont just leave this hanging like this! i like it and i hope you write some more on it :)
Morrie

Don't stop there. You totally need to update this story. It's good and there aren't nearly enough Dawn/Stargate crosses.

Please continue!

I'm working on it, I swear. I just got into a groove on my vacation, and then suddenly I didn't have as much time anymore. But I am working on it, and I am gonna finish it. Just maybe not as soon as one might wish.

Thanks for the encouragement, it means a lot to me.

This is an interesting little fic and I am intrigued enough to keep reading and see where you go with it. Longer chapters would be nice though. *g* Please do post again soon? :)

I'll try, thanks for the review :)

I just foune this story - and I'm having a lot of fun reading it.
(Dawn sneaking around an AF base, looking incredibly suspicious...)

I'm glad you like! Thanks for reviewing :)

The story seems to start now, yeah! :-) I really hope you were jesting about not knowing what will happen. ;-)

With the Stargate open, will they think she is an alien? *grin* What will Jack think, as she was able to come here with no problem of being detected, she could have come the other way too. Hehheh. Have they seen her puzzled expression?
Wonder what would happen if they ask her how old she is with a lying detector or if they want the technologie for her invisibility. Lol, just thinking.

As for the empty elevator and people wondering. Haven't SGC encountered some foes with the ability to become invisible by technology? And maybe she should have folllowed someone with it, as you require a keycard with a code to get this deep into SGC. ;-)

I really hope you continue this, after the first cliffhanger should come a second one and so on. *grin*

I was sadly not jesting. I'm pretty much just writing on the fly.

You'll have to read to find out ;)

I think she walked in just as someone else got out, and they figured it must have been a technical error or something. And even if you know it's possible to be invisible, it's still not something you really consider in your everyday life.

That's the plan :)

Cool. Go for the next Chapter. And I personally have no problems with shorter chapters.

Thanks, glad you liked :)

Invis in the trunk...*chortles* More soon please :D

glad you liked! I'll try to keep 'em coming :D

Okay. Nice bit of emotional build up and interplay in chapter 3, and fairly good interior narrative in chapter 4. The story is a little too simple for my tastes, it feels like a "one of my first stories" kind of writing. As such, it is nice and fairly well done for an early endevour, but nothing "great" in comparison to "all" fiction writing. Certainly a worthy sign that the author continue with his or her writings.

uhm, thanks? I am gonna work a real plot in here, I've just gotta make it happen at a natural point, if you know what I mean. Thanks for reviewing! :)

You have a way to build up the tension. Now I'm curious what will happen with Dawn in the SGC.
How much magic she studied? I believe invisible spell isn't beginners level. ;-)
Btw, I love that you update so fast. :-)

Well, she did study all day, every day for several days, and with her natural aptitude, I figure it's just about enough. I'll try to keep them coming at the same pace :)

Thanks for reviewing!