Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

An Immortal On The Hellmouth

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow this is very cool, I like how you have Jessie playing the Xander part in many of the story lines.

I don't think you have Xander being to harsh, I think he is actually fairly mild for what you have him being.

Great story and I hope you continue it someday!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Any chance of seeing more of this story?
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from Cmiller
Review:
I really like this story and I do hope you eventually add more to it. I also liked that you had Xander adopted Faith. Can't wait for the confrontation.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When She Was Bad" from Vassago
Review:
So...Jesse = Xander in this, and Xander's a 2000+ year old Immortal? That's about the only change.

In the long run, however, there's really been no big change to canon at all from what I can see right now. Either canon.

Except possibly there being 2 Dracula's because of Hellsing and BtVS crossing over.

Why didn't he just think of summoning Alucard when he was captured? Really, when he's "fucked. Absolutely fucked" yet he can summon Alucard? That's not fucked. That's letting yourself be completely fucked because you want to die.

Mention of Belisarius, which means he's probably one of the Generals of the Byzantine Empire, or Justinian.
Comments from author:
'Why didn't he just think of summoning Alucard when he was captured? Really, when he's "fucked. Absolutely fucked" yet he can summon Alucard? That's not fucked. That's letting yourself be completely fucked because you want to die.'

If I recall correctly from my plans - and this has been quite a while and I've lost interest since - he no longer has the ability to summon Alucard and hasn't since he cut himself off from his life as Van Helsing to maintain his cover. Otherwise, Alucard would know what he was and the whole story premise goes out the window entirely.

But then again I'm not sure he could summon Alucard across the Atlantic anyway. Bodies of running water aren't good for Hellsing vampires. They had to be transported to South America in their coffins for that reason, if I recall correctly.

'Mention of Belisarius, which means he's probably one of the Generals of the Byzantine Empire, or Justinian.'

Oh, good catch. You're the only one who's picked up on that. He was a Roman plebeian who ended up joining a legion after awakening his immortal nature, moving through them as the years went on to maintain cover, before moving to the East when the Western half of the empire collapsed entirely and then, eventually, ending up in England after that bit the dust as well and then, finally, to the USA after being 'killed' at the Somme during the First World War.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from stryker
Review:
I absolutely love this fic, the crossing of Highlander and Hellsing and BTVS go so well together. I hope this fic hasn't been abandoned though, it would be a shame to let something this magnificent go to waste.
Comments from author:
I kept saying I would come back to it for a long time but it's not likely to happen now unfortunately. Ah, well. Maybe some day.
Review By [stryker] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you get inspired to add more chapters to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::

#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Catwoman: I am Catwoman. Hear me roar.
- Batman Returns
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from SeekerSidhe
Review:
Fantastic story. I can't wait to see Faith brought into the picture, and the fallout with Hellsing should be fun... Hope your muse returns soon.
Comments from author:
I'm still writing, even if it's not BTVS or posted, so there's still hope yet, even if it's a vague one.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SeekerSidhe] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from rinv
Review:
When you going to update?
Comments from author:
In all honesty, I don't know. The inspiration for this story always came in fits and starts, and now it seems to have totally dried up, at least for now. But rest assured: I won't abandon it. I will be back to it, sooner or later.
Review By [rinv] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.

Long live FALLOUT :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!

And, yes, Fallout is awesome beyond words.
Review By [APS] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
MOREEEE!
Comments from author:
I'm actually working on it. Two thousand words down so far.
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from thundever
Review:
Great story, poor Xander, great interactions, how did Alucard find him? please don't let the Van Helsings' try to kill him and please update soon.
Comments from author:
It has been a while since I updated hasn't it? I'll have to think about getting my mind back into the frame for a new chapter of this. I don't want to abandon it.
Review By [thundever] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from rinv
Review:
Hurry up and update
Comments from author:
It'll come sooner or later.
Review By [rinv] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Halloween" from SmacksKiller
Review:
Very nice story, I would really like to see what happens next. Is Alucard attached to two bloodlines ? Xander's and the Hellsings ? Because I can't really see how else it could work since Immortals are sterile. I can't wait to see Integra, Alucard, Xander and Faith in the same room. That should be hilarious.
Comments from author:
Ah, that would be telling. But I'm going to give away the secret in the next chapter anyway when I get it done. Basically, you'd be right as a rule. Immortals are sterile and cannot have children. End of story. Unless you're steeped in dark magics to the point where you can enslave one of the most powerful monsters in the world to your will, that is. Let's face it, if you can whup Alucard, you can do pretty much anything you damn well please. Not that it came without a price. He lost power. It's been a hundred years, or thereabouts, and he's still not as strong as he was then. Not even close really. Such is life. Nothing comes without a price and violating the laws of nature to that level came with a hefty price-tag indeed.
Review By [SmacksKiller] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 6 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking