Review of chapter "Secrets" from Hawkehunt
You've probably moved on from this over the years - I wouldn't usually review a fic this old, but since it's random review month...
I wouldn't have used this premise for these characters - even though she "knows" it's an actual person writing back, I can't see Ginny pouring herself out in writing again after the CoS incident. My only other suggestion would be to work on using contractions, if you haven't already - particularly when people are angry and emotional.
Review By [Hawkehunt
] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Not Rated