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Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from deathgeonous
This is such a great fic and I really do hope that you will continue it someday soonish. Ah well, thanks for writing it though, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
What a great story!

This is a great look inside Victor Creed's headspace, and at happens when someone lives as long as he and his kids live.
I find it interesting/likely that Buffy is not really a Slayer, I like the idea that she is a Mutant much better and the Council made a mistake.
I think it would be just as bad to have Joyce and Angel hook up as it was to have Buffy and Angel hook up, less creepy since Joyce is well over 50 in this AU but still has the potential to trigger the Happiness event with all its bad news.

Please continue this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from bradsan
Will Buffy get more mutant abilities beside her Slayer abilities after growing older. You have lots of abilities to chose at, If you only look in to her family. That would be really cool and lets face it. She would get more survival changes with more abilities. We know she became stronger with age and after her first dead and her spider-sense became stronger how longer she survived so it's not unnatural to progress some more mutant abilities when growing older.

I'll hope you will update soon. Love supportive Joyce and granddad of course.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
I love the concept. It's always so nice to see supporting cast being given their time in the spotlight... especially when it involves showing or making them more than they canonically appeared to be.

Interesting note for it to end on at the moment. Joyce on the road to letting Angelus loose and it's kinda fun to see how you're prolonging the suspense over, given how unpredictable Mystique's children seem to be, there's always the chance that Buffy's just an ordinary mutant with some psionic abilities thrown in. Could easily be bad, but you seem to be doing a pretty good job of the pacing so far.

I'm sure that, should this ever reach the Cruciamentum without events being changed far too much, it'll be entertaining to see the council learning the hard way that you don't mess with the daughter and granddaughter of Victor Creed.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from Dragonelf
Yay, a new chapter has been added to this story.

I have a baaaaad feeling about this. Will Joyce be the one who causes Angel's curse to break?

::Gives the plot bunny a piece of apple pie::

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I believe a leaf of grass is no less
than the journey-work of the stars.
- Walt Whitman
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from GundumM
ouch this is going to lead to family issues. on the bright side when angel looses his soul this time, Joyce is likely to dust him while hes still in bed, so there wont be a mass murder running loose
Review By [GundumM] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from deathgeonous
There are very few Joyce centric fics, and even fewer Joyce Angel matchups. Good job on writing a good one here. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from borgrabbit
Haiku indigestion:

A leaky soul sinks
Die horribly Angelus
Claws upset stomach


Not necessarily an Angel fan, or detractor. Just seeing the thin ice in the pond.
Comments from author:
Angel can be fun to play with, speaking as a writer. He's got allllll sorts of problems and issues to use and abuse for my writing enjoyment and your reading pleasure....

We have the benefit of knowing what happened in later points of the series - Joyce and Angel do not have that advantage. You see the developing interest as "Danger Will Robinson! Danger!" and they just see - hey, that person looks very interesting...

All I'm going to say is that things definitely won't unfold just the same as the series but with 'Joyce' used instead of the name 'Buffy'.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from skychan
I can only assume that the final sentance about Angel being an entirely differnt kind of mistake is a wonderful forbearer of trajedy to come.
Comments from author:
Just because everyone who watched the series knows that Angel can't have a happy relationship? Remember, at that point in time, Angel had no idea about the Clause to his Curse.
Review By [skychan] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from Morgomir
Interesting turn of events. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from Harry
I think that Scott would not be the only one with issues regarding Victor. I think a certain member of the X-Men who is from Canada would ALSO have problems. When Logan and Victor get together, the sparks fly (and I mean that literally! The fights that those two have had over the years have been amazing!) As for Angel, Joyce DO NOT bed that vampire!! You do that, and you risk something worse than the normal monsters that you face coming out. You risk unleashing ANGELUS! That would not be good for anyone!
Comments from author:
Nobody over at Xavier's associates the name Sabertooth (or Victor Creed) with the idea of doting or overprotective father. The idea that he has a child, that he has grand-daughters is going to almost break a few minds...

I must admit to a little curiosity about whether someone might want to 'save' Joyce & the girls from Joyce's father... snicker.

Logan and Victor have had alllll sorts of issues.

Regarding Joyce and Angel(us) - neither of them suspect the Clause. It was an awful, awful surprise in the series.

Joyce would never put up with the same levels of things that Buffy tolerated from Angelus. Of course, I'm not sure that Angelus would react the same way to Joyce that he did towards Buffy... Now that's something to ponder - Angelus and his reactions to Joyce Creed...
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Ahead" from Brighteyes
I love this story - the idea of Angel and Joyce disturbs me, but I love how you made Joyce Sabertooth's and Mystique's daughter. Is Dawn going to attend Xaviers?
Review By [Brighteyes] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Walk in the Cemetery" from Maleficuslupus
from the 'like spiderman' comment I take it that spiderman is a comic in this fic? because if it's not, is there going to be an explanation as to why spiderman's spider sense is common knowledge?
Review By [Maleficuslupus] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talking About the Relatives" from Dragonelf
Interesting new chapter.

You might want to fix this "picked up the shone" as I assume that meant "picked up the phone".

::Gives the plot bunny some Apple strudel::

We can have facts without thinking but
we cannot have thinking without facts.
- John Dewey
Comments from author:
Glad that you enjoyed.

sigh - corrected, and just how did I miss that anyhow?

mmmm, apple strudel.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talking About the Relatives" from HebiR
I really want to see Logan's reaction to Sabertooth acting all paternal.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [4 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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