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Review of chapter "The Crow: Chaos Burns" from TimeTwist
Not a bad first attempt. Some suggestions, make the makeup less white, and the black a little more grayish or charcoal. She looks a little too much like Harli Quinn or a Malchavian than a Crow. The area around her eyes should also be darkened. Her clothing could be a little darker and little more worn looking. Also the Crow icon somewhere on the picture would also add to it. You can find hundreds of pictures of the symbol on the web. The good one would be from the CD Cover of the soundtrack of the first movie.

As for a story, go for it.
Review By [TimeTwist] • Date [21 Oct 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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