Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from bookworm
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Wow, this story is amazing. Don't know why you had to leave it on a cliff-hanger, though I suppose in some ways that's kind of inevitable. ;-) I hope you have a chance to pick it up again some day.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [8 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from Angelskuuipo
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Oh my. That's a heck of a cliffhanger there.
This is an awesome fic! Your voices are spot on. I hope your muse lets you return to it soon. :)
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from Letomo
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Found this story, and really enjoyed it. You capture Mal's voice perfectly, and the I could hear Kaylee in my head when she talked. Impressive writing!
I hope it isn't abandoned, it is a good story, and needs more telling!
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from Letomo
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Don't know if you will continue this, but it is a very good story. The character's voices all 'feel' right, and it catches the reader [me] up in it, and won't let go. If you get the muse again, please continue it!
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from amazonsummons
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So nicely written, hope for an update soon! Also been wondering if there are any demons left, I mean they could get on a ship just as easily as a human
Review By [amazonsummons] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from onefreeman
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This is shaping up to be an excellent story - I like the character development, like the idea, and like the copious creative chinese cursing! :p
Is there more to come? :)
Review By [onefreeman] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from Hawkehunt
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Ai ya! Ruttin' son of a-
That's not an angle I've ever though of before, nor anyone else I've talked to. Well done.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from Bobboky
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awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from RevDorothyL
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Ai-ya! I might not be all that sympathetic toward the Tam parental units, but now you've got me petrified for Jayne's dear old mum and for Kaylee's folks.
Arrgh! If this really was the Operative's work, I expect River and Jayne will unite with the rest of the crew to hunt him down and finish him, this time, regardless of his new, 'enlightened' perspective on the perfidy of Parliament.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from Darksidhe
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I really love how you weave BtVS with Firefly. Great characterization of all of the crew! Really love the paternal relationship between Mal and his "albatross".
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [15 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from SassyFrass
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And the plot thickens! I really liked the interaction between Mal and River.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [15 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Storm's Getting Worse" from war
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good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [15 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Beacons of True Civilization" from dreameralways
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It's been so long! I'm so glad to see an update and look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Beacons of True Civilization" from joshlamont
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Oh, awesome, you picked this up! I've always enjoyed what you write, but this, this is definitely one I hope you get to finish. I love that you've written Mal as perceptive as he is in this, and I can't wait to see how things go with him and River, and what else Book wrote/left behind.
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated