Review of chapter "Pulling the Strings" from goldenspringtime
Cool story Angel waking up on a autopsy table , very interesting.
Review By [goldenspringtime
] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pulling the Strings" from eponine
Love the first part, but the second part is too short and too unfinished for me to really judge it at all. The first part stands on its own really well, so unless you're planning on continuing the second part, there's no real need for pt. 2. As for pt. 1, highly enjoyable. Love Angel's confusion in the face of sheer indifference :D
Review By [eponine
] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking The Dead" from MarcusRowland
Small error right at the end, should be Las Vegas, not LA.
Wouldn't they be a little curious as to why he was in Las Vegas and who shot him?
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing out the error. I am used to only putting Angel in LA or Sunnydale.
I'll be doing more than story in the CSI-verse where Angel will meet the characters again. And since it was for TtH100 I didn't want to draw this one out into an extended multi-part fic because the fics are technically supposed to be drabbles/ficlets (or at least that's my understanding.)
Review By [MarcusRowland
] • Date [28 Oct 05] • Not Rated