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Review of chapter "A New Team" from AceDreamer
Review:
An interesting short(ish) story, which I'm pretty sure is based on:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Sten_Chronicles

I've read a great deal of science fiction, and I _think_ I've read some of the stories in this 'military SF' series of novels. If you don't mind me saying so, I think the quality of your writing in this BtVS cross-over is at least as good as that in the 'Sten' books, and may well exceed them.

The 'Sten' series is 'C'-grade science fiction, amusing, with plenty of action, but not (as far as I can recall) exceptional in any way. Though the bits around the Emperor aren't bad. I'm glad you found things in them which led you to write this x-over fanfic.

Whistler becoming human as part of the team - I don't recall any other fanfic which uses this idea. I like what you've done with jonathon, here, my only complaint is that I'd like to have seen more of him in action - he was always an under-used character in BtVS, almost totally in a supporting role - a lot of wasted potential.

So, thanks for writing this, and I'd be happy to read more of your work in future.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [17 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team" from DieselDriver
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Cool beginning. Yes, 9 chapters is a beginning. Of course that implies more, much more to come. I hope it does come. I would like more info about who these people are and what is "AM2"?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [20 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ayo Gurkhali" from DieselDriver
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"Wee spotted snakes"? Who is this Jonathon anyway??? Wouldn't be a clone maybe, instead of the Jonathon from the Buffy series? Interesting first chapter. I have no idea who Sten is so I'm going at it cold. Good stuff though. Just enough back history to keep it real.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [20 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team" from Delkatar
Review:
Great story!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from eriktheviking
Review:
Still a cracking good story with a much welcome flashback to books I read 20+ years ago. Thank you.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Nice leadoff for another longer tale! I appreciate that there is a writer out there with similar tastes in fiction. I might have to dredge up some of my favorites to see if I can inspire you further. Keep up the most excellent work!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from Tjin
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i liked it, wish there was more but... thanks for letting us read.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team" from Orchamus
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One of the best stories I've read in a while. Loved the attention to detail.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from LordSia
Review:
Would probably be much cooler if I had read the books, but still, kinda nice. Cut out on a lot of detail though, you did. Make fic longer, you should. Why talking like Yoda, I am?
Review By [LordSia] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from Tjin
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i really like this fic, i know it's been some time since an update but... PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Review By [Tjin] • Date [31 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team" from DofEire
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This is quite satisfying. Not quite 'Super-Xander', not quite 'Zeppo-Xander', but a nice upgrade. :) Do you plan to continue it?
Review By [DofEire] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from Elleria
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Interesting development. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from mikerich
Review:
GREAT STORY.IF the team comes back threw the Stargate wont the SGC confiscate all the things they bring back with them AND NOT GIVE THEM BACK.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from eriktheviking
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. I first read the books back in high school and I think you are getting the characters right.

Looking forward to seeing how it continues even without going to the Sten universe.

Great writing.

Thanks

Lee
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team" from Zoroz
Review:
interesting :)
Review By [Zoroz] • Date [28 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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