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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Great start.

I wish there were more!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Hawk
Review:
Great story love how you did it. When do you plan to update it?
Review By [Hawk] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from nargus
Review:
The story was going well until this chapter. Not sure why is Harris decided he need to give anyone anything or tell a supposed "alien government" the tactical capacity of his own ship. Moreover, why is Hammond even ask such question so early? And ask them to hand over their technology? If it goes like a norm for Stargate's civilizations, their response could be anywhere from simply refusal to declaring war on Earth for their presumtion.
Review By [nargus] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
The large wall of text scared me off.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stargate Andromeda" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
You need to use contractions and Halloween should not have followed the exact same pattern as canon when you introduced that many changes.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Traveler
Review:
No picking on the grammar or sentence structure, just a request to please continue this story.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from darkKnight
Review:
I just discovered and read your story and like it very much. Why don't you continue?
Review By [darkKnight] • Date [8 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Still like it, awkward phrasing and all. Update, please?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from HappyWonKinobi
Review:
I loved this story. I truly hope that you can add a new chapter to it sometime soon.
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [25 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DieselDriver
Review:
"in orbit above Antarctica"

Sorry, but that is a physical impossibility. The only place you can put an object in orbit and have it stay over the same spot on Earth is in what is called a Geostationary orbit. That means the period of the orbit is exactly the same as the Earth's rotation and it has to be directly over the equator.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Geostationary_orbit

Since the Antarctic is 90 degrees from the equator any orbit that goes over Antarctica would also pass over the Arctic as well.

My suggestion if they really don't want the station to be seen, is to put the it in the L2 Lagrange point on the far side of the moon. That way, it will orbit in the same time period as the moon, staying out of sight from the Earth's surface as long is it remains there.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lagrangian_point
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DieselDriver
Review:
I have to wonder at what Rommie's abilities are and how they stack up compared to humans (nietcheans?) as far as strength and reaction times go and also durability. Also interested in seeing what her martial arts capabilities are.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DieselDriver
Review:
I'm sorry, the story is really good, I love it. But the construction of your sentences and the wording of your dialogue is almost as though English is not your native language. A lot of the conversations come off as stilted rather than being conversational. I just can't imagine Jack saying "I will not do that" instead of "I won't do that". That's an example, not a quote from the story. But there are many places like that. One spot in this chapter you say "the Asgard was...". Bleh! That should have been "the Asgard were...". You need a better set of proofreaders or something. I was going to wait till I got to the end so far, but just couldn't stand it any longer.

Again, great story. I didn't want to interrupt reading it to make these comments but I had to. Back to reading...

Ack! Right off in the next chapter you do it again. "Two months had pass since..." should be "Two months had passed since..."
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from purrfus
Review:
Re-read all the way in one setting.

I had forgotten how ambitious this story is. Like the mix of realities so far. And the political bits are nicely done.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
great story so for, thank you for sharing
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Delkatar
Review:
Great story!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [15 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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