You have a good story going here. Other than some word choices and misspellings here and there it was a good read. I would like to see you continue this if you can. Work on keeping your words correct, not the way you form their message, but the way you spell the right word for what you want to say. Keep a dictionary and a thesaurus handy when you want to know how to correctly spell a word. Remember to do everything so you have a story that is easy to follow and still entertains.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Stargate Andromeda By mystic : Why no updates for this interesting Andromeda / Buffy / Star-Gate story you developed that in my mind answer the Ship of the line Challenge in most if not all ways , Because you made so good of a start with what you wrote so far please please more , If required bribe your muse with some cookies OK .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I am truly enjoying this story and hope that you update soon , I am tracking most if not all of the responses to the Ship of the Line Challenge & am find them all most interesting but also so different to each other, some one shots others with ongoing development .
Even if your story is not officially a Ship of the Line story to me it meets the true spirit of the Challenge .
Hope for more updates ASAP so I have more to read .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
well, this is something i wish i'd found a little earlier, great story and i hope you don't have too serious a case of writers block, hope to see some interesting new chapters sometime in the near future, if you need some ideas drop a line or something.
Review By [shakeval] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Not Rated
I like it so far, but why would Xander assume he would HAVE to give technology to the military? They could ask, and even threaten, but he doesn't HAVE to give them a darn thing.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
This is a wonderful crossover. I love Xander In Charge fics. I understand why you made the choice you did. However, I would have loved if they kept the the space station and made it their new home/base.
Can't wait to read more.
Review By [malchance] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
This fic has an excellent story, plot twists are really good, plus intelligent cast... Most of it is pure gold. Unfortunately, it's a little hard to read - a bit of misspelling/ miswording IS here, - but I'm definitely starting to track it. And yes, each chapter so far is better then previous. Thank you, kind author. Awaiting more of this work.
Stargate Andromeda By mystic : A very detailed Halloween crossover story BtVS , Andromeda & Stargate SG 1 staring Xander Harris , One that has caught my eye and has me hooked so now I am hoping that it will be continued by Mystic as it is to good of a story to not be update & conclude in time .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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