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Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from ChefJackButler
Review:
Long story, but readable from start to finish.

My only complaint is that you regularly have your *AMERICAN* characters talking as if they came from the Midlands in England. Its petty, I know, but your story would be much, much better if you learn and use American English when your characters are speaking it. I'm not talking the differences in spelling. I'm talking about the differences in jargon.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Ok, let's get this out of the way.....whew!

Ok, now that that's done, I just read through all this a second time, and I am amazed now as I was the first time I read it.

So let me see if I have this right -- was Judge Dansey the Voice telling the Beast what to do and where to go? Sending him mental text messages through the Dark Side of the Force, as it were? And the Circle of the Black Thorn naming Lilah Morgan as the head investigator? Oh, she'll use that for certain to get a rather shapely leg up on old soon-to-be dead Holland Manners...and then from there she'll have to find her way to the SGC to fulfill Xander's vision through the Force. Somehow I see Xander sensing her presence before too long; since the Jedi are investigating the attack on Wolfram and Hart's LA branch, they'll sense the Dark Side at work soon enough, and most likely it might be Lindsey putting two and two together and coming up with Darth Lilah.

If Xander does defeat Lilah in their inevitable confrontation, he'll recognize the lightsaber as belonging to his Sith counterpart from the Wishverse. I wonder how he'll react when he reads "Willow" and "Padmé" on the hilt?

So how much more evidence will the SGC need before they discover the secret of their ancient Colonial brethren from the Cyrannus system? Lords of Kobol guide them...cause I sure would like to see Vipers and Raptors flying alongside Xander's Z-95s...

And when Dr Jackson Faces the Mirror, will it be Ra he faces or Apophis? Rebecca Clayton, of course, may have to face her fears in the form of her late and unlamented grandfather Dansey, whom I always imagine looks and sounds uncannily like Ian McDiarmid...and all just in time for the world to face the forces of Anubis!

Please come back to this, it's been far too long since your last posting...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from StrigiformeLover
Review:
Is Daniel going to be a Jedi Sentinel with a Yellow Lightsaber?
That fits him, I think.
Review By [StrigiformeLover] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Information And Facts" from zonianx
Review:
I really like this story. So thanks for sharing this with us. I am not by any measure a Star Wars expert but what are the chances that Kenobi has met or heard of Ewoks before his mind was transfered to Xander.
Review By [zonianx] • Date [4 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from Oddshot
Review:
I am loving your Jedi Harris & Terran Jedi series and I so hope your Muse is making you to write more of this series so you will update it soon .

I so need to know what going to happen in these stories.

Yours Oddshot
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Almost Hush - Part Two" from zonianx
Review:
I guess you are skipping using Tara in this story. I thought you might when Oz was able to control his lycan ability. Only negative I have about this story is the non-inclusion of one of my favorite characters. The only thing that could be worse is if Dawn is not sent to Buffy, and I guess we will see soon as the Dracula episode should be coming up.
Review By [zonianx] • Date [29 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from Kalliza
Review:
Just re-read this, and it was wonderful. I question how quickly Xander's Padawans "graduate" to full Knighthood, but the fic is still great. I've become more conversant in more of the shows referenced, too, and now I keep hoping that there will be more side-plots with Torchwood, or Doctor Who, or West Wing. I just get this vivid scene in my head of Jed Bartlett and Leo McGarry meeting and talking with Xander. I also feel that the relationship with Rebecca sort of came out of left field, but am looking forward to seeing where it goes and how it develops. Also looking forward to seeing what you do with Willow. Your plots are moving farther and farther away from Buffy cannon, which I approve of. Having it too similar is tedious, and I really admire those who can keep a coherent story while diverging from what's known. I know I can't.

Thanks for the awesome fic, and I look forward to reading more!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from troujin
Review:
good chapter. i cant wait for next update
Review By [troujin] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from gaulty
Review:
Good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from gaulty
Review:
Good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking Chances" from DieselDriver
Review:
It's been a grand journey so far. I look forward to traveling this road further when the road has been extended as it were...

Truly this is a great story. I applaud your skill at story telling. Not only do I look forward to reading more of this story as you post it, I am going to look up other stories you've written.

Thanks for posting.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jedi, Slayers, Watchers and Sith" from DieselDriver
Review:
How very reminiscent of the line "That's no moon, it's a space station" was said. It's been over 30 years since I saw the movie. I think that was the best line of the whole movie series. Or maybe it's my other favorite one "It's a trap!"

"That's no hill, that's a spacecraft."

How cool is that??? Who ya gonna call? That would be Xander.

You know, it just occurred to me that Lilah might just follow Rebecca's path if properly educated. If Xander takes away her light sabre, maybe by cutting it in half while they are fighting. That might just get her attention. Seriously, they are going to need all the help they can get fighting the Goa'uld. It's worth a shot...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Skeletons and Closets - Part Two" from DieselDriver
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Oh Yeah, Tallboy... The Goa'uld would get a big bang out of one of those

"http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tallboy_%28bomb%29".

Even better:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grand_Slam_bomb

Biggest conventional bomb ever used as far as I know. Dropped one in a harbor instead of hitting the docks they were aiming at and lifted an entire German submarine up and onto the dock. Hmm. The article does not mention this incident. Perhaps it is apocryphal. I heard it from my father who was a B-17 crewmember from 1943 till the end of the war.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Viewing of Possibilities" from DieselDriver
Review:
This sentence has been bugging me from the first time I read it but I forgot to comment last time through. I had to back up about 5 chapters so I could put the review on the correct chapter.

"speeds of over a thousand kilometres an hour in the atmosphere should be possible."

Please. That's only about mach 0.9. An F-22 will cruise faster than that. I believe I've read that they will cruise at Mach 1.2 with a top speed of about 1500 mph. That's right close to 2400 KPH. If you'd have said three thousand KPH it would make a lot more sense.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gods And Doctors" from DieselDriver
Review:
OMG! The proof reader is going to be embarrassed by this one...

"“Should be?” asked Damn, showing a disconcerting ability to highlight ambiguous words."

I suspect that should be "Dawn" since I don't recall any character whose name is "Damn".


How do you find a needle in a hay stack? Easy... With a magnet.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
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