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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from banner
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I read this story a long time ago, and then lost it. I'm delighted to find it again, especially now that it's complete. I love this view of Draco. You keep him in character and believable. He has grown and developed depth. I wonder what a powerful, trained wizard could have done in the battle with the First. Draco would have been very useful against the Dork Trio, as well.
Review By [banner] • Date [7 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from ManyNamedChibi
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Awsome story.
Review By [ManyNamedChibi] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Lin
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The end...no no no..that can't be the end...it just can't be!!!
Review By [Lin] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from imaginarylove
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i really liked it.
but i kind of wish it was longer and told more about like hogwarts
it was great though :)
Review By [imaginarylove] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from banner
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I like this story - it's well thought out from beginning to end. Draco is smart, and a lot stronger than he realized. He'll do well.
Review By [banner] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Vld
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Oh, I certainly hope the story ISN't complete YET! I mean, this PART is complete. NOw I think it needs a sequel. Like, will Buffy be brought back from the dead? Or Faith is released from jail, and tries to pay her debt to Buffy by protecting the Hellmouth. Draco being an ass to whichever Slayer you chose because of the pain they inflected on Dawn (even if Buffy didn't do it on purpose...). He stops Willow from abusing her magics, stuff like that.
Review By [Vld] • Date [23 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Naitch
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Very good story. I hop eyou follow up with a sequel to shw where they would go from there. FI not, open endings are always good.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [22 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Niraerlinn
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I really liked this, I thought Draco was very in character and that his interactions with the Scoobies seemed very real.
Review By [Niraerlinn] • Date [22 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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I really enjoyed this. I liked seeing how Draco reluctantly changed over the story and how he and Dawn interacted.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [21 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from banner
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It's fun watching Draco grow up a little.
Well done.
Review By [banner] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dulcinea
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On the forums, there's this long thread about authors info-dumping. I'm glad to say this is one of the best examples I've seen of an author avoiding that when HP characters initially meet the Scoobies. The inquisition by Spike is informative and yet believable. Draco is as reticent as you'd expect a pureblooded wizard to be, and so there are still plenty of questions left up in the air. I can't wait to see how you plan to bring Dawn out of the shadows. Good start!
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)boo
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Please continue this sounds interesting
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [24 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from dulcinea
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This looks like a really good start. I think you've got Spike's personality- the reluctantly good big bad- down well. I'm curious to see how you'll develop Draco's character and cope with what must be going on back at Hogwarts.
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [22 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from watersprite
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Sweet, that was cool
Review By [watersprite] • Date [22 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mistaken Delivery" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
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Brilliant!! I hope you write more on this than the intro chapter. I'd love to see what the scoobs do with little lost Draco.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [22 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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