Ohh, continue this one. Or is it done? Becuase honestly, you did leave off at a nice place, but it doesn't say compleate, and it doesn't feel it either. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
I love the story, read it a ton of times. Can you update soon please? I would love to see how it turns out. I can't wait to see Jayne's Ma's reaction or Simon and River's. Read a story once that said that Regan was happy to see her babies, while their Pa wasn't. Thanks.
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Absolutely adorable! Thanks for posting this, and for giving me the pleasure, once again, of witnessing how good Jayne is at taking care of River, and of how good they can be for each other.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Again, the River/Jayne dynamics are adorable, as is the way everybody else is starting to come around -- more or less -- to seeing how good Jayne is for her (the fact that Jayne LIKES listening to her, even though he can't begin to follow her math, for instance, or the fact that his common sense and heightened intuition where River's concerned is sometimes right when her math is wrong).
Love it!
And I hope River's pneumonia (or whatever) is not too long-lived.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
River/Jayne is now my favorite, hottest, sweetest pairing, thanks to this fic. Thanks for the many happy moments you've given them, and for allowing them to be so good to and for one another.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Huhuh! Trust Mal to think the obvious. I wouldn't have thought that either, though! Inara teaching etiquette to a kid... I'd have rather seen her as some kinda psychiatrist or something like that. I mean, listening to people is also part of her job, less known, AND more important than the sex part.
Well I guess I'm not the only one who skipped a day of work to finish reading this fic. ^_^
I love your smut, and I also love how you can slip it in there without making the entire story just about the sex. People's reactions are believable, and all in all it's just a great read.
Review By [cursedcassandra] • Date [21 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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