Review By [Bill] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Devil You Know" from Niklarus
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I had not expected to see an update to this after all this time. I'm very glad to have been wrong. This was every bit as excellent as the previous chapters.
Review By [Niklarus] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Best Laid Plans of Headmasters" from VillageOrchid
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Good set up on the irony of someone with a big heart being the son of a man with a stunted heart.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Marie Antoinette" from VillageOrchid
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I've read other Xander is an HP character's son stories, but I don't think I've read one where the reveal was during the final battle (unless of course I read this one years ago and forgot). This is cool.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Errors of My Ways" from DragonBard
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Why not the shovel speech instead of the icepick speech?
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review By [Bill] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Character Reference" from BrownFinderth
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Kei has written a very good story, so far!! Now, I realize it's been a year since the author has written Chapter six. So, maybe Kei would be able to come back and add more to this revealing tale?
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Character Reference" from unslunghero
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I really hope you'll continue this. I think the lead-up to this discussion has been good, but the real meat of the story is just starting. I'm interested in where you could go with this conversation in particular - killer father and killer son finding forgiveness and reconcilliation. What would the relationship between Xander and Draco be like, as sorta-kinda brothers? Would Xander find a relationship with someone from Hogwarts or someone he already knows (I'm a big Spander fan; just sayin' ;). So much promise in this one...
Review By [unslunghero] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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