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Dawn's Letter From Camp

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Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from Chunkman
Review:
I knew Dawn was dead as soon as I read that name. well at least Dawn didn't do drugs so the person could switch it out with cleaning supplies. Or was that 3?

Oh well either way it was a fun little fic despite the fact you killed one of my favorite scoobies.
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks for your review. I thought for a minute there I was the only person who ever so Sleepy Away Camp 2!!
Review By [Chunkman] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Ha. I thought this was amusing in that teen slasher movie way :) Never seen the movie though, but it sounds like an excellent B scary movie lol
Comments from author:
Wow!! I never thought I receive another review on this, let alone not a disgusted reader one. Apparently I'm the ONLY person who ever saw Sleep-away Camp 2! This was my first and last attempt at writing, so glad u enjoyed it. U really should watch the movie.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from Dema
Review:
I think this so cute a letter home that never leaves. I love it. I hope you write another fic soon.
Comments from author:
Wow thanks, this is hands down the nicest review I have ever received. Thanks, however, judging from my other reviews I think I may need to leave the writing to others.
Review By [Dema] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from orangemike
Review:
Not one of my faves. I hope you don't let our reaction to this one drag you down as a writer.
Comments from author:
Well it was my first trek out and I know I crossed it over with a movie that only I probably watched so I tried not to take the negative reviews to heart. But in all likelihood I probably wont write again, I just don't think I have a knack for it. Thanks for the review though. I am still hoping one day some one who actually saw Sleep-away Camp2 will read it and get the joke. Bye.
Review By [orangemike] • Date [25 Aug 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from Duchess
Review:
*staring in shock* What is this crossover? Ewwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! Not totally awake, but does this mean Dawn is dead here?
Comments from author:
As a door nail!
Review By [Duchess] • Date [11 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from Vld
Review:
Well, nice letter. I must say I'm a little surprised. I mean, dawn faced... and killed... Turok-Hans during the last battle, so how is it than something probably a lot less stronger than a Turok-Han (maybe a little more than a weakling, but not even close to spike or Angel'sleague, I'm sure of it) could do her in? And let's admit it was possible, what about the Scoobs coming down there to avenge her?
Comments from author:
It was a really weird slasher movie I watched called Sleepaway Camp 2. I thought it was funny, my husband thought it was nuts. There is this counselor that everyone thinks is so weird, and she actually kills you calmly with a smile. I mean NO ONE ever saw it coming from her it was a silly riot.
Review By [Vld] • Date [11 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from Wise
Review:
No climax, no punch line, no meaning.

The letter is fine as far as letters home go, but the story seems to exist for no reason other than to kill Dawn, and while that may work for a thread on the forums, it doesn't work in an actual story.

It's also disappointing that after all the creativity shown in the letter itself, none of it could be spared for the final sentence of the story, which ends the tale before the most interesting part can even begin. *grumbles*
Comments from author:
Well thanks for the creativity comment and I am sorry to disappoint you with the ending. That was the 1st and only thing I have ever written, so when I took the chance on the forum I figured I'd go all out and post it here too just to see if it received any type of reaction. I am actually working on a real story now, but I am more nervous because I know it has to actaully have plot, climax and everything else. So thanks for your review and I hope when I finally do my real story it will flow better.
Review By [Wise] • Date [10 Nov 05] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Letter From Camp" from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, this is an odd little story. But I liked it, even though I feel like I shouldn't have. Lol!
Comments from author:
Funny that is what people generally say about me too..hmm...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Nov 05] • Not Rated
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