Review of chapter "Little Liaison Lost" from EmilyT
This was really good. I like how you used the flashback of Lorne's prediction that Eve's future wasn't going to be good. That was interesting because Eve's implied death at the end of the series really doesn't make Lorne's prediction that accurate.
i also like how you incorporated many of the lost characters.
It was a great story, and I like how you didn't change anything that has happened on either of the shows to make it work.
Review By [EmilyT
] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little Liaison Lost" from Mediancat
Nicely done -- I especially like the use of a more obscure character like Eve, and the "why they crashed" explanation is a very good one.
Rob aka Mediancat
Review By [Mediancat
] • Date [5 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little Liaison Lost" from Jewel
This was really good. I never managed to get into Lost - it just never caught my imagination. But this story did. Well done.
Review By [Jewel
] • Date [19 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little Liaison Lost" from Jmaria
Absoulutely love this story! It's so nice to see the otherside of life on the island, and I like how you've got Eve hanging back rather than forcing her way into the 'clique'. The whole twist on why everyone's on the island is very W&H. Great job!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. When I decided to write this story I had four objectives 1.) Fill in some of the gaps in Eve's origins. 2.) have a scene from an actual angle episode be one of the flashbacks, beacause Eve's last few episodes really did set up the idea so perfectly. 3.) Give a glimps of what life on the Island might be like for the "other" castaways and 4.) Reveal Wolfram and Hart were the ones behind the island.
Glad to see I apparently succeeded, at least in most of my goals.
Review By [Jmaria
] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little Liaison Lost" from Electroniszappa
Interesting story. Not a big Lost fan myself, but what little I do know could tottaly buy W&H setting the whole thing up. Would not want to piss them off, that's for sure. Keep up the good work..
Comments from author:
Thanks dude, glad to see you enjoyed it despite not being a "Lost" fan.
Review By [Electroniszappa
] • Date [15 Nov 05] • Not Rated