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Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
There is a sequel?!? Where?!?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Sad but good, fits with the Rambo mythos.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween" from purrfus
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I was recommending your stuff to a friend who has only recently started reading BtVS crosses, and decided to come back and read some stories again.

This is definitely worth the re-read.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from LordSia
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Cool. Nice start, have to see where this is going. Why haven't you put it up as a series, though?
Review By [LordSia] • Date [12 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from spring
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I had found the sequel first and so I decided after reading two paragraphs that I really should find the first half. ^_^ I really really love this wonderful fic and I am now off to the sequel ^_^
Review By [spring] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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awesome story, nice you killed of that stupid stein and nice costume choise for Angel, I had a good laugh about that. Going of to the sequel now.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from (Past Donor)James
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Well done.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from Bluesnowman
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Good work please update.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [26 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from purrfus
Review:
I love well done Halloween fics, and as usual yours is very well done. Loved the combinations: the change in costumes for the girls, and the gag costume for Angel (oh boy). It was also interesting to see Xan in a situation where leaving town was the best choice. Really looking forward to the sequel.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [22 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from Bobboky
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sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from biggstu
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Good read Thanks
Review By [biggstu] • Date [9 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from VillageOrchid
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Pretty good AU world-building overall.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (3/?)" from VillageOrchid
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A few things clear and few not so clear. While the transformation benefits the long term results of Willow, Buffy and Xander... many people died -- some children who had tranformed and some of the cops by their actions.

Less clear... when did Joxer change back to Angel? Was it already daylight? What do each of them get from their duties? (Buffy gets understanding of some dead and ancient languages which are actually going to help her read some of those old prophesies better than any modern watcher... but what else. More visuals on Willow's body lanugage maybe? Thoughts and words.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween" from VillageOrchid
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At first I wasn't going to read this one, because not a big fan of Rambo movies, but I *love* that you made him a real person with an extended, long career. A man who could run out of bullets. That leaves a lot of room to say the movies exgarerated some parts, and a combination of John Rambo's strategy, knowldge and personal/professional contacts is what made the slightly less entertaining difference.

Also loved that Xander, later established as "the one who sees", sees newbie vampire's house keys and wallets. It makes perfect sense. The part about staying with his parents and starting up in the basement early (as a high school sophmore) also really works and starts to establish why he might be less in denial about his home life and how that connects to his dealing with his newly found wealth.

I enjoyed your twist of Xander suggesting Xena and Gabriella to Willow and Buffy, even if Willow ends up being "the ghost of Xena" -- I think the series had progressed enough that Gabrielle would be of her warrior queen-level of fighting skills.

Thanks for sharing.

PS I checked this out because you have a star gate crossover in your sequel.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xanbo: First Halloween (5/5)" from Elleria
Review:
Love this...going to read what you have posted of the sequel now.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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