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The Xander, The Watch and Everything

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Review of chapter "The Xander, The Watch and a New Sunnydale 9 Finis" from purrfus
Review:
A very strange mix. I was a little disappointed at the one time extended use, but overall - cute and fluffy fun.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Xander, The Watch and a New Sunnydale 9 Finis" from (Current Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story i hope there is or will be a sequel
Review By [(Current Donor)drdeth] • Date [12 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander, The Watch and a New Sunnydale 9 Finis" from biggstu
Review:
what a good read. I think you finished on a good spot either to continue or just leave as is nice to see Xander normal -- not some Uber
Review By [biggstu] • Date [10 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander, The Watch and a New Sunnydale 9 Finis" from Elleria
Review:
Love this...more soon please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander, The Watch and a New Sunnydale 9 Finis" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I think it ended on just the right note.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [26 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander, The Watch and a New Sunnydale 8" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [16 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander The Watch and a New Sunnydale 7" from Elleria
Review:
Love this story. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [5 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander The Watch and a New Sunnydale 6" from Elleria
Review:
Update soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Xander The Watch and a New Sunnydale 6" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A good chapter for this story and probably one of the best dialog scenes - with pauses for thoughts and movitations, yet moving forward --that I've ever read from you.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'll try to include more dialog scenes in the future...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breakfast at the New Home" from MBB
Review:
This story does not feel very realistic to me.
I find it hard to believe Xander would loose his hormones, grow a fashion sense, devellop investment skills and become self-confident, only because he inharited a watch.
Or that after all these overnight attitude changes in their friend, the Scoobies would put him in charge in stead of sending him to a psychiatrist.
Comments from author:
I see that you've only read up to part 4 of the 5 posted, but here goes...

There's only one sentence that seems to indicate Xander is a 'money master' but in a previous statement he's openly admitted he's going to be learning the whole property investment business, but that he also has Jenny as his personal assistant to run it all through. So I'd say more *enthusiastic* than self-confident. He *is* stubborn on the Deadboy issue, no new change in personality.

Fashion sense...Jenny picked out the clothes he's wearing and he didn't go home and pick up his regular clothes in my story. If this were going to go beyond ten parts (it isn't) then Cordelia would occasionally be sneaking into his wrdrobe and purging it of 'evil.' But as of part 4, it's only been 12 hours since time restarted.

So other than stubborn on the deadboy issue, nothing out of character yet. And he's a bit tired from the time "off the closck" so doesn't really have the energy to make an ass of himself yet (don't worry, he can still manage it!).

At teh end of part 5, he and Cordelia are playful, and his resolve to Jenny wanting a little more time to find a soul curse, is giving slightly.

Giles, Willow and Jenny recognize the map idea as a good one, so they indicate as much. He isn't being deferred to, but do you really think Giles is going to get really nasty with Xander in the young man's uppler-class home until he has had a real justification?

Some of the issues you've brought up (drum rol for the spoilers please...) will be dealt with in part 6...in a Giles-Xander conversation while they wait to see if the soul curse will work. (Oops, second spoiler).

Please keep reading and commenting, responding to the various points had let me figure out how to transition this to an ending in the last 3 parts (7-10 of 10).

tm
Review By [MBB] • Date [2 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe a Curse?" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breakfast at the New Home" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting analysis of Liam-Angel.. and quite credible considering how the series showed him when he was all human.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Synchronization" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A plausible and fun interpretation.
I like that you have Xander having collecting and analyzed data for months if not years.
So he used up maybe 5 and a half days of his 10? And there's only stopping time, not going back.
I'd have Oz become his designated heir, if he needs to use the time up soon.
Thanks for sharing the tale.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Synchronization" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [28 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Synchronization" from banner
Review:
Wonderful use of the item.
Man, things are gonna change 'round there.
Review By [banner] • Date [28 Nov 05] • Not Rated
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